In keeping with some of our other recent QOTDs (see all of the 2017 QOTDs
here), this one is mostly about meaning, and mechanical grammar rules won’t get you all that far. Good times.
Quote:
B. with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each,
I guess this is OK. It’s just a series of modifiers, all of which make sense: “of up to 600 rooms each” modifies the “75 carefully engineered structures”, and “connected by a complex regional system of roads” modifies that whole chunk that comes before it “75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms each.” It feels a little bit awkward, but that doesn’t matter. Keep (B).
, thank you for the explanation. I need a quick clarification. With respect to option B- your response states "connected" modifies the whole chunk that comes before, but- ed modifiers modify the thing just prior to the comma, in this case "600 room each". However, since 600 rooms each is itself a modifier to the previous chuck 75 engineers......, we conclude that "connected" modifies the whole chunk before. Is that the reason - connected can be traced back to modify the whole thing before the commas. Does my doubt make sense?