sivasanjeev
The Bengal school attempted to create an authentic style of Indian painting based on the study of the art of ancient India,
Indian medieval miniature traditions, as well as European and Japanese art.A. Indian medieval miniature traditions, as well as European and Japanese art
B. and Indian medieval miniature traditions, as well as European and Japanese art
C. Indian medieval miniature traditions, and European and Japanese art as well
D. and Indian medieval miniature traditions, and European as well as Japanese art
E. Indian medieval miniature traditions, European, and Japanese art
ConnectTheDots
Hi Mike,
Could you please help with the SC ?
Thanks a lot!!
Dear
ConnectTheDots,
I'm happy to respond to your p.m.
To be honest, I think this question is not a great question. It's a little deceptive and it tests a very very subtle point.
There are three elements following the word "
of":
the art of ancient India
medieval miniature traditions
European and Japanese artThere's no obvious reason why all three of those couldn't be in parallel:
P, Q, and R. Putting the first two in parallel, and then adding the third in an "
as well as" construction --- that's also correct, but to choose this over simple parallelism, we would need some sort of compelling motivation, and the sentence doesn't provide that. The construction in choice (A),
P, Q, as well as R, is one common mistake pattern for simple parallelism, so that alone is not to motivate the necessity of the "
as well as" construction.
One further problem, that makes the question even more deceptive, is the comma immediately before the underlined section. In the simple parallelism case,
P, Q, and R, we need a comma after the first element. In the construction that the question says is correct,
P and Q, as well as R, there should be no comma after the first term. Having that comma there suggested to me that the structure they want, in choice
(B), is wrong, because that comma would be incorrect in that construction.
If this were a well-written GMAT SC practice question, the word "
India" would also be underlined, and the presence or absence of the comma after that word could be varied among the answer choices. My friend, it is very easy to write GMAT SC practice questions that are of exceptionally low quality. Just because someone on the web says that something is a good question, don't automatically assume that it is. Have you ever heard the very cynical assessment: "
Free ... and worth it"?
Here's a high quality GMAT SC question:
https://gmat.magoosh.com/questions/3266Mike