OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
The Happy Planet Index,
which ranks 151 countries, considers data like life expectancy, overall well-being, and a country’s ecological footprint on calculating the happiness of a country.
A) which ranks 151 countries, considers data like life expectancy, overall well-being, and a country’s ecological footprint on calculating the happiness of a country
B) which ranks the happiness of 151 countries, considers data like life expectancy and overall well-being and a country’s ecological footprint
C) which ranks the happiness of 151 countries, considers data such as life expectancy and overall well-being, as well as the country’s ecological footprint in its calculations
D) which ranks 151 countries, considers data such as life expectancy, overall well-being, as well as a country’s ecological footprint when calculating the happiness of a country
E) which ranks 151 countries, consider data such as life expectancy, overall well-being, and a country’s ecological footprint to deter¬mine the happiness of a country
Quick POE
1. Eliminate E because consider is a plural verb and The Happy Planet Index is singular.
2. Be suspicious of A and B because
such as should be used to introduce examples, not
like.
→ Eliminate (A) for the incorrect use of "on calculating." The word on should be
in or
when→ Eliminate (B) because
X and Y and Z is not a correct list construction
3. Eliminate (D) because
X, Y, as well as Z is not a correct list construction
The answer is (C). The correct list construction in this case is
X and Y, as well as Z.
More in-depth analysis
THE PROMPTQuote:
The Happy Planet Index, which ranks 151 countries, considers data like life expectancy, overall well-being, and a country’s ecological footprint on calculating the happiness of a country.
• Concepts tested?
→ lists
→ subject/verb agreement
→ such as vs. like
→ idiom with preposition
inTwo idioms that contain the word
consider are not tested.
There are two such idioms, and at least one construction involving
consider that GMAC still rejects. (See Notes, below.)
•
Tip: one of GMAC's sneakiest traps involves lists that are correct but that do not conform to what you expect.This question involves that kind of list.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) which ranks 151 countries, considers data like life expectancy, overall well-being, and a country’s ecological footprint on calculating the happiness of a country
• to list examples,
such as is preferred to
like • the preposition
on is incorrect and should be
in or
when→ correct: I consider factors such as the clarity of the thesis statement and creative analysis in calculating essay grades.
→ correct: I consider factors such as the clarity of the thesis statement and creative analysis when [I am] calculating essay grades.
ELIMINATE A
Note: the list in option A follows what most aspirants expect: X, Y, and Z.
That structure is not the only way to list more than two items and is not the structure of the list in the correct answer.
GMAC likes to fool around with list structure.
Quote:
B) which ranks the happiness of 151 countries, considers data like life expectancy and overall well-being and a country’s ecological footprint
• The structure of the list in this option is not idiomatic:
→
X and Y and Z is incorrect.
X = life expectancy
Y = overall well-being
Z = a country's ecological footprint
→ we need the structure of the list used in either (A) or (C)
•
such as rather than
like should be used to list examples
If you are not sure about this option, keep it and look for a better one.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) which ranks the happiness of 151 countries, considers data such as life expectancy and overall well-being, as well as the country’s ecological footprint in its calculations
• The list in this option is correctly constructed:
X and Y, as well as Z→ in the parallel structure
X and Y, the word
and indicates that X and Y are equally weighted, whereas
→ the phrase
as well as Z typically suggests that Z is not as important as X and Y.
Correct:
One common healthy diet includes fruits and vegetables, carbohydrates, and protein, as well as a bit of healthy fat.→ That list has the structure
P and Q, R, and S, as well as T→ Notice the Oxford comma (the
comma + and that precedes "S": I have never seen an official question that fails to use this comma.
→ Journalists in newspapers do not use this comma. They are saving space.
GMAC uses the Oxford comma, which can help us sort out the kind of list an option is giving us.
For a discussion of
and and
as well as, see
this post, here. • (C) uses
such as rather than
like to introduce examples
KEEP
Quote:
D) which ranks 151 countries, considers data such as life expectancy, [AND] overall well-being, as well as a country’s ecological footprint when calculating the happiness of a country
• this list structure is incorrect:
X, Y, as well as Z→ We need the structure in option C (
X and Y, as well as Z) or the structure in option A (
X, Y, and Z)
• The X and Y elements need the word
and between them.
→ The phrase
as well as before the third element in the list implies that the third element is not as important as the first two elements.
Quote:
E) which ranks 151 countries, consider data such as life expectancy, overall well-being, and a country’s ecological footprint to determine the happiness of a country
• subject/verb disagreement
Happy Planet Index is singular. The verb should be
considers, singular, not
consider, plural.
ELIMINATE E
The answer is C.Notes→
ListsYou may be tested on your ability to recognize that you are looking at a list even though it does not follow the typical
X, Y, and Z pattern.
→ X, Y, and Z always requires an Oxford comma (the comma that is placed before the last item in a list)
→ These structures are okay, too:
P, Q and R, and S
P, Q, and R, as well as S
P and Q, R, and S, as well as T
P and Q, as well as R (obviously - answer C)
→
Consider -- part an idiom?Yes. Just not in this sentence.
I am happy to be proven wrong.
When
consider means "to regard (someone or something) as having a specified quality,"
here, #2,GMAC
(1) tests one idiom:
Consider X, Y(2) has recently used another idiom that many thought was incorrect:
Consider X to be Yand
(3) rejects other constructions, especially
Consider X as Y.
then "consider" is idiomatic.
With respect to #2 above, GMAC recently
used the expression
Consider X to be Y in the non-underlined portion of a question.
That is,
consider to be is occasionally acceptable on the GMAT.
Spoiler alert: One recent official question used
consider . . . to be in the non-underlined portion of the sentence.
You can find that question by clicking
here.
With respect to #3 above,
Consider X as Y is not idiomatic.
If someone wants to produce an official question in which
consider as is part of the correct answer or part of the non-underlined portion of an official question, I will amend my stance.
I have not seen such a question.
That one recent
consider to be usage may not be well-known, so people may still be teaching that only one idiom is acceptable.
I think that this recent question and one other that I cannot recall at the moment signal only that
Consider X, Y will not be pitted against
Consider X to be Y.
I do not think that this recent question signals that the idiom
Consider X, Y has ceased to be.
When
consider means
to think carefully about, especially in order to make a decision, the verb simply takes direct objects and is not part of an idiomatic expression.
Correct:
Universities consider A, B, and C when making admissions decisions.That usage has nothing to do with idioms and everything to do with transitive verbs that require direct objects.
COMMENTSAntrikshR and
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