jasonjason
Disclaimer: This comment isn't an LBS bash; in fact, after the info session, I'm very sold on LBS, and I wish I had done the app in an earlier round.
I'm a R2 applicant, and as I'm working through the essays, I wonder what the questions say about the school and how our answers help Adcom determine fit.
While the questions on contribution to team and community obviously speak of what LBS values, I'm not sure that asking these questions directly provide Adcom the best means of gauging our values and our ability to contribute to these things.
Two questions on future direction (as opposed to questions on past accomplishment).
One on leadership and application, which is OK.
One on future ECs, which is open-ended and an opportunity to dove-tail in other material, albeit in a oblique fashion.
Not sure what other applicants think of the essays, but this emphasis on future and less of past has a lot running in the hypothetical space.
Thoughts?
Good question, jasonjason. The unwritten rule here is that you should be using your past experiences to justify the ideas you write about in your essays.
For example, on the first essay question, you should be writing about how your past and present experiences influenced you to decide on the career direction you want to take post-MBA. Similarly, your proposed future ECs should be a logical extension of the types of ECs you were involved with in the past and present.
The adcom will definitely evaluate your story in each essay to see if it is feasible, given your past. Even if you are a career-changer, the motivations behind your switch and the pathway you will take to accomplish it will need to be clear. And if you were not involved in any ECs in undergrad, but your essay mentions that you want to start a new club, be president of an existing club and do many other things while at LBS, they are not going to be convinced of your drive to make it happen.