OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
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The People's Republic of China, having 1.3 billion people, with many of them living in outlying rural areas far to the west of Beijing, often considered an emerging superpower.
A) . . . China, having 1.3 billion people, with many of them living in outlying rural areas far to the west of Beijing, [VERB?] [IS] often considered
B) . . . China having 1.3 billion people, many living in outlying rural areas far to the west of Beijing, often would have been considered as
C) with 1.3 billion people, many living in outlying rural areas far to the west of Beijing, often has been considered
D) with 1.3 billion people, and many of them live in outlying rural areas far to the west of Beijing, often has been considered
E) . . . China with 1.3 billion people, with many living in outlying rural areas far to the west of Beijing, often have been considered
First, let’s look at the larger sentence, ignoring the clause in the middle for a moment.
• Split #1: Main VerbThe subject is
the People’s Republic of China.
This subject needs a verb.
Choice (A) commits the famous missing verb mistake: it has a participle [a verbED],
considered, rather than a full verb.
Choice (A) is wrong.
Option (B)'s original
would have been considered suggests either a hypothetical or a time period gone by but in both cases is missing its other part—an IF clause or a time frame.
Suppose we are talking about a Type 3 conditional (an impossible condition in the past and its probable result).
If THIS thing had happened, then THAT thing would have happened.
If __________________, then China would have been considered a superpower.
Whoops. There's a missing IF clause.
Suppose we are talking about a time in the past. Okay. When?
→ In Hitler's Germany from 1933 to 1945, anti-fascist political activism
would have been considered a mortal threat.
In English, the phrasing of the verb "often would have been" implies more context.
A native ear expects to hear "the rest" of the context of the verb.
"The rest" is not forthcoming in option B.
Choice (B) is incorrect
• Split #2: Subject/Verb AgreementOf course, there are many people in China, but
China is a singular collective noun and requires a singular verb.
Choice (E) uses the plural verb
have been considered—this is a subject/verb agreement error.
Choice (E) is incorrect.
• Split #3: IdiomIn Choice (B),
considered as is not idiomatic.
Consider X, Y is preferred.
Consider X to be Y is acceptable but rare.
Consider X as Y is always incorrect.
• Split #4: ConstructionNow, we’re down to just (C) & (D).
Choice (D) has an odd, clumsy structure:
[noun][noun modifier]and[independent clause],[verb]
This is not a correct structure.
We can’t have a full independent clause come between a subject and a verb.
Choice (D) is incorrect.
The only possible choice is (C).COMMENTSThe original option B contained a typo.
The original option B should have said, ". . . . often would have been considered AS."
The corrected version does so.
Considered AS is not idiomatic.
Even without the AS, the verb phrasing in option B is a bit off, as I explained above.
Explanations below are quite good.
Keep up the hard work.