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The presence of blue-green algae blooms in Lake Erie has disrupted regular water supply for over 400,000 people in Ohio, their numbers increasing to hazardous levels as a result of polluted runoff from industries and farmlands and warm temperatures.

A) increasing to hazardous levels
B) are increasing to hazardous levels
C) were increased to hazardous levels and
D) have increased to hazardous levels
E) increasing to hazardous levels and

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what is wrong with D here? could not understand why A was chosen over D
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The presence of blue-green algae blooms in Lake Erie has disrupted regular water supply for over 400,000 people in Ohio, their numbers increasing to hazardous levels as a result of polluted runoff from industries and farmlands and warm temperatures.

A) increasing to hazardous levels
B) are increasing to hazardous levels
C) were increased to hazardous levels and
D) have increased to hazardous levels
E) increasing to hazardous levels and

Sourced from RSSing.com - neither OA nor OE is available. - open to a wide discussion and consensus. The deferred OA is not the official one


what is wrong with D here? could not understand why A was chosen over D


I also chose D as the correct answer but now i realized if we put D in the original sentence the whole sentence becomes a run on sentence. Both the clauses are separated only by a comma(have increased will become the verb). If we use verb+ing it modifies the sentence and doesn't form a runon sentence.

Please correct me if i m wrong
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sudarshan22 hazelnut GMATNinja sir Kindly guide why Option D is incorrect here and why Option A is correct
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sudarshan22 hazelnut GMATNinja sir Kindly guide why Option D is incorrect here and why Option A is correct


Hi,

Though I am not one of the experts that you tagged, I can still shed some light on why option D is incorrect. Option D is a full independent clause with a subject and a verb. We cannot have two independent clause joined by merely a comma as this would be classified as a run-on sentence. Option A on the other hand is an absolute phrase and is neat and succinct. Please do make a note on this as there are several OG questions out there where a trap answer is similar to option B/C/D (full clause joined only by a comma) and the correct answer is similar to option A (absolute phrase).

Hope this helps!
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The presence of blue-green algae blooms in Lake Erie has disrupted regular water supply for over 400,000 people in Ohio, their numbers increasing to hazardous levels as a result of polluted runoff from industries and farmlands and warm temperatures.

A) increasing to hazardous levels
B) are increasing to hazardous levels
C) were increased to hazardous levels and
D) have increased to hazardous levels
E) increasing to hazardous levels and

Sourced from RSSing.com - neither OA nor OE is available. - open to a wide discussion and consensus. The deferred OA is not the official one

Hi,
This is such a classic FANBOYS example. Since the second clause/modifier, "their.....temperatures", is in a non underlined portion of the sentence, we can ignore the options trying to make it an independent clause. So, B,C, & D are out. Between A & E, E uses "and", which is a parallel marker and meaning less here.

Hence, A is correct.
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daagh wrote:
The presence of blue-green algae blooms in Lake Erie has disrupted regular water supply for over 400,000 people in Ohio, their numbers increasing to hazardous levels as a result of polluted runoff from industries and farmlands and warm temperatures.

A) increasing to hazardous levels
B) are increasing to hazardous levels
C) were increased to hazardous levels and
D) have increased to hazardous levels
E) increasing to hazardous levels and

Sourced from RSSing.com - neither OA nor OE is available. - open to a wide discussion and consensus. The deferred OA is not the official one

Hi,
This is such a classic FANBOYS example. Since the second clause/modifier, "their.....temperatures", is in a non underlined portion of the sentence, we can ignore the options trying to make it an independent clause. So, B,C, & D are out. Between A & E, E uses "and", which is a parallel marker and meaning less here.

Hence, A is correct.


so, we use A or E because we are describing, a situation (increase in numbers) that happened in the first clause, with the second clause here ?
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Doer01 wrote:
daagh wrote:
The presence of blue-green algae blooms in Lake Erie has disrupted regular water supply for over 400,000 people in Ohio, their numbers increasing to hazardous levels as a result of polluted runoff from industries and farmlands and warm temperatures.

A) increasing to hazardous levels
B) are increasing to hazardous levels
C) were increased to hazardous levels and
D) have increased to hazardous levels
E) increasing to hazardous levels and

Sourced from RSSing.com - neither OA nor OE is available. - open to a wide discussion and consensus. The deferred OA is not the official one

Hi,
This is such a classic FANBOYS example. Since the second clause/modifier, "their.....temperatures", is in a non underlined portion of the sentence, we can ignore the options trying to make it an independent clause. So, B,C, & D are out. Between A & E, E uses "and", which is a parallel marker and meaning less here.

Hence, A is correct.


so, we use A or E because we are describing, a situation (increase in numbers) that happened in the first clause, with the second clause here ?

Hi,
I wouldn’t say describing. Its more of a consequence/event to result sequence.
Something happens in the lake and resulted in something else.

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Hi,

I found the usage of "their" here a bit ambiguous in terms of its modified entity. can someone explain how to resolve this?
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I found the usage of "their" here a bit ambiguous in terms of its modified entity. can someone explain how to resolve this?


Alga is the singular noun and requires a singular verb

Algae is the plural form and requires a plural verb
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MoulikaSaxena wrote:
Hi,

I found the usage of "their" here a bit ambiguous in terms of its modified entity. can someone explain how to resolve this?


Alga is the singular noun and requires a singular verb

Algae is the plural form and requires a plural verb


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No I meant it seems like their is referring to presence and not algae
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The presence of blue-green algae blooms in Lake Erie has disrupted regular water supply for over 400,000 people in Ohio, their numbers increasing to hazardous levels as a result of polluted runoff from industries and farmlands and warm temperatures.

A) increasing to hazardous levels
B) are increasing to hazardous levels
C) were increased to hazardous levels and
D) have increased to hazardous levels
E) increasing to hazardous levels and

Sourced from RSSing.com - neither OA nor OE is available. - open to a wide discussion and consensus. The deferred OA is not the official one


Hello

I rejected B, C, D as it was leading to a sentence running into a sentence (run-on). Between A and E, I chose A because of the wrong usage of and.

Hope my explanation helps!
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why is D not correct ??I marked A as an answer after reading the sentence twice but now when I am reviewing it, I find it difficult to eliminate D
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why is D not correct ??I marked A as an answer after reading the sentence twice but now when I am reviewing it, I find it difficult to eliminate D

Hello, warrior1991. (A) is the only defendable answer, since it is the one that correctly incorporates what is known as an absolute phrase, the ambiguous their notwithstanding. These questions give GMAT™ aspirants plenty of grief, from what I have observed on the forum. My guess is that the problem lies in the phrase itself appearing to be an aborted clause. However, an absolute phrase modifies the whole sentence and should be missing a main verb in the following structure:

[noun] + [participle] + [optional modifiers or objects]

The presence of blue-green algae blooms in Lake Erie has disrupted regular water supply for over 400,000 people in Ohio, their numbers increasing to hazardous levels as a result of polluted runoff from industries and farmlands and warm temperatures.

Answer choices (B), (C), and (D) all place a verb after numbers, creating what is known as a comma splice—a grammatically incorrect sentence in which a comma stands in for a period or semicolon. That is, you cannot join two independent clauses with nothing more than a comma (i.e. without a conjunction). Thus, the only grammatical sentences are (A) and (E). Between the two, the latter part of (E), the and, should make it an easy elimination.

I do not think the sentence would appear as is on the GMAT™, but you should know how to identify an absolute phrase, since, again, they pop up now and again in 700-level questions.

I hope that helps. Thank you for thinking to ask me.

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Thank you so much. It is very helpful when you chip in quickly after I tag you. Thanks for answering to all my queries so far. I have learnt a lot from your explanations.
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Thank you so much. It is very helpful when you chip in quickly after I tag you. Thanks for answering to all my queries so far. I have learnt a lot from your explanations.

That is great to hear. I like to offer my thoughts whenever I can, and this day finds me with a little more time on my hands. (Just luck of the draw.) Still, I do aim to reply whenever I am tagged, whether the question is of higher quality, reasonable quality (like this one), or dubious quality (so that I point out what I feel is lacking in the sentence for everyone to appreciate).

Keep working through questions little by little, study what makes them tick. More and more questions will not make you better, but grasping the underpinnings of a few questions has broad application.

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