generis wrote:
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click HereThere is a considerable body of evidence that NASA, under extreme political pressure, skillfully
faked the first moon landing in 1968 by doctoring TV transmissions, transposing a film of astronauts taken during gravity free training flights against a moon backdrop.
A) faked the first moon landing in 1968 by doctoring TV transmissions, transposing
B) faked the first moon landing in 1968 by doctoring TV transmissions and transposed
C) in 1968 faked the first moon landing by doctoring TV transmissions, transposing
D) faked the first moon landing in 1968, doctoring TV transmissions when transposing
E) faked the first moon landing in 1968 by doctoring and transposing TV transmission
Few things before I attempt this:
a)Verb-ed form and Verb-ing form can be parallel.
b)If a verb-ing form is used after the , it denotes how or as a result of perspective.
A) faked the first moon landing in 1968 by doctoring TV transmissions, transposing
Here transposing fits the bill for its uses.B) faked the first moon landing in 1968 by doctoring TV transmissions and transposed
This is a classic case of forced parallelism- faked & transposed - Why forced.? Because it changes the original meaning of the sentence from faked something by doing something and as a result something happened to faked something and done something.C) in 1968 faked the first moon landing by doctoring TV transmissions, transposing
placement of in 1968 is better in A.D) faked the first moon landing in 1968, doctoring TV transmissions when transposing
till doctoring TV transmissions it's correct but the use of when for transposing messes up the meaning.E) faked the first moon landing in 1968 by doctoring and transposing TV transmission
As in B it changes the meaning of the sentence.