Their Diamond Princess, quarantined off Yokohama, which suffered over 700 infections and eight deaths among its passengers and crew, was a conspicuous early victim of the pandemic, its global fame growing on wry-turning-to-desperate postings from its passengers.
A) Their Diamond Princess, quarantined off Yokohama, which suffered over 700 infections and eight deaths among its passengers and crew, was a conspicuous early victim of the pandemic, its global fame growing on wry-turning-to-desperate postings from its passengers
B) Their Diamond Princess, quarantined off Yokohama, suffering over 700 infections and eight deaths among its passengers and crew, was a conspicuous early victim of the pandemic, its global fame growing on wry-turning-to-desperate postings from its passengers
C) Their Diamond Princess, quarantined off Yokohama, suffering over 700 infections and eight deaths among its passengers and crew, was a conspicuous early victim of the pandemic, and global fame growing on wry-turning-to-desperate postings from its passengers
D) Their Diamond Princess, quarantined off Yokohama, was suffering over 700 infections and eight deaths among its passengers and crew, which was a conspicuous early victim of the pandemic, its global fame growing on wry-turning-to-desperate postings from its passengers
E) Their Diamond Princess, quarantined off Yokohama, was suffering over 700 infections and eight deaths among its passengers and crew, which was a conspicuous early victim of the pandemic, and its global fame growing on wry-turning-to-desperate postings from its passengers
A. Quarantined off yokohama describes sea princess,the which is a modifier that can jump over phrases occasionally when the meaning and sentence structure demands it. For reference check emily dickenson question in
official guide. Looks correct.
B. Two back to back modifier phrases separated by comma, not wrong but definitely awkward and is far inferior to choice A.
C. And is used to connect a noun phrase, it should be an independent clause.
D. Which modifies crew. Incorrect.
E. Same as D
A looks correct
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