(A) and he earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes he flew to be
1) An idiomatic error: "SO + ADJ + THAT + CLAUSE" is the correct idiom. Hence, there should be "
so new that many of the planes he flew were...".
I don't see any problem other than that mentioned above: "
them" clearly refers to "
sixteen official international speed records". the second clause after "
and" seems ok to me since it has a clear relationship with the first one.
(B) earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes he flew were
1) "
comma + earning" is a obvious error: "comma + V_ing" usually modifies the nearest action and its agent, delineating simultaneity, immediate consuquence and son on.So, "
earning" is wrong because
only after he finished earning or achieve ALL sixteen speed records, he could hold them.
2) "
at a time that": "when" works better with time than does "that"
3) The idiom, "SO + ADJ + THAT + CLAUSE", is used incorrectly
(C) earning these at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes he flew were
1) "comma + earning" is wrong.
2) "
these at a time where": "
these" can not be used as a pronoun although some O.G. questions have used it thus.
3) "at a time
where": "
where" can not refer ti time
(D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes he flew were
1) the only problem I can see is with "
so new such that": "such" is redundant.
(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes he flew were[/quote]
1) "earned" is used here as a modifier,"comma + V_ed". this modifier usually modifies some noun in the preciding clause. Here, it modifies "
sixteen official international speed records".
2) "so + adj+that+clause" is used correctly
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