OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Quote:
The reason that the winged bean can thrive on poor soil
is because their roots house bacteria that can turn atmospheric nitrogen into fertilizer.
A) is
because their roots house bacteria that can turn
B) is
because its roots house bacteria
which can turn
C) is that
their roots house bacteria
turning D) is that its roots house bacteria that can turn
E)
being that its roots house bacteria and can turn
•
the reason is because•
the reason whyBoth expressions are redundant.
Correct: The reason is thatSee Notes, below.
• Split #1: the winged bean, singular v. their, pluralThe winged bean is singular, but options A and C incorrectly refer to "their" roots.
We have noun-pronoun disagreement.
ELIMINATE A and C
• Split #2: that and which are not interchangeableIn SWE,
which cannot be without a preceding comma unless the word is the object of a preposition.
In other words, if you see
which in a sentence and no commas flank the word, then
which is impermissibly trying to be
that.
In British English—including British journalism—
which and
that are interchangeable.
Not so on the GMAT.
Option B uses
which can turn without commas to set off non-essential information.
ELIMINATE B
• Split #3: All sentences need verbs, not verbalsOption E does not contain a verb for the word
reason.
The other options use
is.
Option E uses an __ING word, a verbal, that is not a working verb.
ELIMINATE E
• Split #4: The reason is because is redundant (see Notes)In options A and B,
the reason is because is redundant.
Horribly, ear-splittingly redundant.
I know. Both options are already eliminated.
I just wanted to stress this point.
Oh, and to say that
the reason why is also wrong and also redundant.
The answer is DNOTES • redundancy - on the GMAT and in good writing generally, "the reason is" and "because" are redundant.
GMAC prefers concision. "The reason is" and
because repeat the same idea.
The reason tells us why something happened.
Because also tells us why something happened.
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The reason already announces that we are about to hear a causal explanation.
Because indicates the same idea.
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This site, here discusses the construction at issue. Essentially we are saying that "the reason is the reason.”
-- In speech, native speakers frequently use "the reason . . is because." They also use "the reason why." Both usages are redundant.
-- GMAC follows the typical rule for formal writing:
because and
the reason is are redundant, and concision is important.
Redundancy is not necessarily fatal. Make sure that a correct answer without redundancy exists.
When redundancy arises, see whether you can find a better answer—one that does not repeat ideas.
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Takeaway: Compare options. Which is better? Which is worse? Pick the better one.
The reason that he arrived early to lecture is because he wanted to get a seat near the front. [WORSE]
He arrived early to lecture because he wanted to get a seat near the front. [BETTER]
COMMENTSbudhni , welcome to SC Butler.
It's very late, so I'll keep my remarks short. Ready?
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