OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Surveys indicate that feelings of happiness and satisfaction are relative; a poor man
may wish he was $1 million richer, yet a millionaire may still feel unsatisfied and wishes he had $2 million more.
• Concept tested: how to use the verb WISH
→ When we want a situation in the present or future to be different, we
wish for something hypothetical or contrary to fact.
The subjunctive mood is required.
→
wish follows a structure similar to
If I were . . . The pronoun takes
were, not
was.
→
I wish I were in Marseilles.→
She wishes [that] she were a tennis champion.→
he wishes that I were editing his papers.•
WISH follows two somewhat difficult rules, both rooted in the
subjunctive mood:
(1) like reported speech, the verb
wish "backshifts" the subsequent verb—for example, from present to past tense.
Fact: He wishes to have $1 million dollars (in the present).
To express this thought, we backshift from the simple present [he
has $1 million] to the simple past and say:
He wishes [that] he had $1 million dollars.(2) All pronouns take
were. (Usually we would say
I was, she was, or
he was. No. Use
were for everyone.)
More examples:
→
I wish I were in New England to see the autumn leaves.→
She wishes that she were finished with TOEFL.→
He wishes that she were near him.You will not hear
wish used properly very often.
Wrong, 100% of the time:
I wish that I was a time traveler.Correct:
I wish that I were a time traveler..
In this sentence, we deal with two verbs after the verb
wish:
to be (the first man) and
to have (the second man)
Both constructions must use the subjunctive: (1)
wish . . . were in the first case and (2)
wish . . . had in the second case.
The second man's verb is
to have in the sense of "to possess."
→ A millionaire
will wish [that] he
had $2 million more.
Wrong: A millionaire will wish that he
has $2 million more.
The verb tense shifts "back" one time period, in this case, from present to past—from
has to
had.
It does not matter whether a modal such as
may is involved. He "may wish" is still in present tense.
Wishes made in the present (or future) (1) backshift one time period to the past and (2) couple any pronoun with
were rather than
was.THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) may wish he
was $1 million richer, yet a millionaire
may still
feel unsatisfied and
wishes he had
•
wish and the subjunctive require
was to be
were •
wishes should be
wish → . . . a millionaire (1) may still feel unsatisfied and (2) [MAY] wishes (???) that he had $2 million more. No. There is no such thing as "he may wishes." The correct language is "he may wish."
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) may wish he
were $1 million richer, yet a millionaire may still feel unsatisfied and wish he
had • the first verb phrase, anchored by
wish, is correctly followed by
were (not by "was")
→ the verb after
wish must "backshift" from present (
is $1 million richer) to past ("was" $1 million richer) BUT because the verb is
to be, that backshift is always
were• the second verb phrase, also anchored by
wish, also "backshifts" one time period
→ Rather than . . .
wish he has $2 million more, we backshift the verb to simple past,
had• the syntax is cohesive
→ the parallel verbs
may wish and
may feel and . . .[may] still wish tie the two examples together, a suturing that in turn makes the construction of the sentence "work."
The first clause states the general case. The second clause elaborates on that case by offering two parallel yet distinct examples.
KEEP
Quote:
C) may wish he
was $1 million richer, yet a millionaire
will still feel unsatisfied and
wish he had •
was should be
were→ the verb
wish requires that all pronouns, including he, use
were rather than
was.
•
will wish is not quite right
→
may wish and
will wish are not parallel and express different degrees of certainty.
May is possible.
Will is definite.
It's not logical to assert that a poor man
may wish for XYZ whereas a rich man
will wish for ABC; each kind of man is supposed to display the
same tendency that is described in the first clause.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D)
wishes he
was $1 million richer, yet a millionaire still feels unsatisfied and
wishes he had
•
was should be
were•
wishes is not as apt as
may wish. → The first clause articulates a general "truth" about human happiness whose philosophical tone is better matched by one man who "may wish" XYZ and by another man who may wish ABC
(Don't worry if this bullet point confuses you. Its content is subtle and difficult. If you know the first bullet point, you're okay.)
Quote:
E) may wish he were $1 million richer, yet a millionaire may still feel unsatisfied and wish he
has•
has should be
had→
wish requires that verbs be backshifted
The correct answer is B.COMMENTS
sharmashivng ,
chillbrorelax (that's quite a username

),
amit2100 , and
SairamRamo , welcome to SC Butler.
I see a few occasional visitors and a few veterans.
I am glad to "see" all of you.
sharmashivng , trying your best is exactly right.
I talk a lot about how students should strive for excellence rather than try to be "right," or to look smarter than others. (Or to hoard kudos, a behavior that baffles me.).
You were on the right track; you just needed to know that "wish" requires a subjunctive construction.
That fact is not mentioned very often. So now you and many others know, native speakers included.
(As I mentioned, very few native speakers use
I wish I were.)
manvig , true, Beyonce is not a boy. Great song. An excellent explanatory device.
These answers range from very good to excellent.
Lucky are they who follow. Speaking of: read this thread. Many different approaches enrich this conversation topic and will add to any aspirant's repertoire.
Nicely done, all.