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Yup, sounds like you got it.. Feel free to PM me if you get stuck.
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Great, thank you again rhyme! I will PM you once I get some ideas fleshed out. At least all this discussion on the forums got me thinking and brainstorming about the essays before they come out!

Let's hope I get out of the IT sector and into an ultra-elite like you did! =)
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Great, thank you again rhyme! I will PM you once I get some ideas fleshed out. At least all this discussion on the forums got me thinking and brainstorming about the essays before they come out!

Let's hope I get out of the IT sector and into an ultra-elite like you did! =)


If I did it, anyone can.
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One other tidbit... dont forget to explain why you need an MBA (and especially why you need an MBA from school X)..

If you think about the logical progression.... (im not saying this should be your layout for your essay, go ahead and be a bit more creative for that if you want, but in terms of logical connect the dots.... )

* This is what I've done
--->
* This is what I did that exposed me to X
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* I researched/whatever X and I now know I want to do X
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* Although I have skill Y, I can't do X without more skills.
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* Specifically, I need A,B,C
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* School Z is perfect because it offers D,E,F which directly address my needs of A,B,C and it also has G, which just sounds fun and has nothing to do with X, but I'm mentioning it here because I'm more well rounded than just some guy whose all about work.
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* I love you, admit me, pretty please.

Something like that... Just keep to a logical progression and you'll be fine.
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Good stuff rhyme, as always! Now the hard part is to find out what that I've done exposed me to international biz and entrep. Nothing specifically exposed me to it, but I might have to add an extra logical step in there:

This is what I've done
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* This is what I did that exposed me to T and U
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* I've always had an interest in doing business overseas due to T skills and entrepreneurship due to U skills, and they will help me be successful at doing Int'l Biz and Ent. (X).
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* I researched Int'l Biz and Ent (X) and I now know I want to do it
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* I can't do X because I need more background/foundation Biz skills

and so forth.

For Entrepreneurship, is it wise to mention that I like to "control my own destiny" (of course not literally worded like that)? I know it sounds cliche, but isn't that one of the reasons why people want to do Ent.?
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Good stuff rhyme, as always! Now the hard part is to find out what that I've done exposed me to international biz and entrep.

I think " Entrepreneurship: having my career dip into small groups where people had to do a lot of different responsibilities gave me a glimpse of what this is all about." pretty much answers (I'd flush it out a bit more, maybe give an example) the "why am i interested in this stuff"

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For Entrepreneurship, is it wise to mention that I like to "control my own destiny" (of course not literally worded like that)? I know it sounds cliche, but isn't that one of the reasons why people want to do Ent.?


I'd use a less cliche type phrase, but sure... Other options include the fact that you like to be involved in key decision making processes, have a passion for strategy, or maybe that you find yourself wanting to be a part of areas outside your immediate job description, or just that you want to be in control of your vision, and entreprenuership gives you that ability. (Just be careful not to come across as the kind of person who might be inflexible in a team setting).
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I think I have a good idea of how to start my "Why Entrepreneurship" part of the "Why MBA/This School" essays.

Thanks so much rhyme!
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I think I have a good idea of how to start my "Why Entrepreneurship" part of the "Why MBA/This School" essays.

Thanks so much rhyme!


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Alternatively you could say:

"Although I've been working in IT for three years, I've always been most fascinated by the nature of the business problems I've worked on. In 2006, I had the opportunity to work on the launch of XYZ. Working closely with various departments including marketing, legal, finance and risk management, I spent six months learning how our business works on both a tactical and strategic level. The diversity of the teams I worked with and the new and challenging strategic elements I faced sparked an interest in consulting. Since then, I've had several conversations with an old friend at FIRM XYZ, which has solidified my desire to pursue a career in management consulting..... "


Hey rhyme, you're cheating! You read my essays! :-D
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Alternatively you could say:

"Although I've been working in IT for three years, I've always been most fascinated by the nature of the business problems I've worked on. In 2006, I had the opportunity to work on the launch of XYZ. Working closely with various departments including marketing, legal, finance and risk management, I spent six months learning how our business works on both a tactical and strategic level. The diversity of the teams I worked with and the new and challenging strategic elements I faced sparked an interest in consulting. Since then, I've had several conversations with an old friend at FIRM XYZ, which has solidified my desire to pursue a career in management consulting..... "

Hey rhyme, you're cheating! You read my essays! :-D


I wrote that from my head.... not from anyone's essays...
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j/k of course :)
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j/k of course :)


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