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I wanted to know the value-add offered by admission consulting services and to do an assessment wanted to see the level of details or feedback included in the comments. Please share a sample before and after essay with comments.
Note: To be clear I am not looking for an "actual" client essay. What I am looking for is a sample (may be a paragraph) of a hypothetical essay showing the type and the depth of comments you provide to guide clients..e.g., a) If an essay paragraph uses excessive wordings and repetitions, are the review comments focussed more on actually providing a reworded paragraph vs. giving high level direction by saying that paragraph is too wordy and should be made concise
b) if there is a grammatical mistake, do you highlight those with a possible alternative or not?
Note: To be clear I am not looking for an "actual" client essay. What I am looking for is a sample (may be a paragraph) of a hypothetical essay showing the type and the depth of comments you provide to guide clients..e.g., a) If an essay paragraph uses excessive wordings and repetitions, are the review comments focussed more on actually providing a reworded paragraph vs. giving high level direction by saying that paragraph is too wordy and should be made concise
b) if there is a grammatical mistake, do you highlight those with a possible alternative or not?
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I wanted to know the value-add offered by admission consulting services and to do an assessment wanted to see the level of details or feedback included in the comments. Please share a sample before and after essay with comments.
Note: To be clear I am not looking for an "actual" client essay. What I am looking for is a sample (may be a paragraph) of a hypothetical essay showing the type and the depth of comments you provide to guide clients..e.g., a) If an essay paragraph uses excessive wordings and repetitions, are the review comments focussed more on actually providing a reworded paragraph vs. giving high level direction by saying that paragraph is too wordy and should be made concise
b) if there is a grammatical mistake, do you highlight those with a possible alternative or not?
Note: To be clear I am not looking for an "actual" client essay. What I am looking for is a sample (may be a paragraph) of a hypothetical essay showing the type and the depth of comments you provide to guide clients..e.g., a) If an essay paragraph uses excessive wordings and repetitions, are the review comments focussed more on actually providing a reworded paragraph vs. giving high level direction by saying that paragraph is too wordy and should be made concise
b) if there is a grammatical mistake, do you highlight those with a possible alternative or not?
Dear Sir,
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We actually have three different volumes out now and that should be a good start.
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