The division of the day into twenty-four
hours, rather than into some other number of periods, are essentially random, and most people can scarcely imagine dividing the day in any other way.
A)hours, rather than into some other number of periods,
are essentially random,
and most people can scarcely imagine dividing the day
The Subject in non-underlined portion is Singular (Division), so singular verb must be used. Use of AND distorts the intended meaning of the sentence. IncorrectB)hours is essentially random,
unlike some other number of periods, and yet most people can scarcely imagine the day
being dividedIncorrect comparison between Division and Unlike some other number of periods is incorrect. Moreover there is no need to use BEING. IncorrectC)hours, unlike some other number of periods, is essentially random,
despite the fact that people can scarcely imagine the day
being divided
There is no need to use BEING. Moreover, DESPITE changes the meaning of the sentence.
It seems Division is some impact of lack of people imagination. But the author wants that these two activities are not cause n effectIncorrectD)hours, rather than into some other number of periods, is essentially random, yet most people can scarcely imagine dividing the day
CorrectE)hours
are essentially random,
unlike other numbers of periods; people can scarcely imagine the day
being dividedThe Subject in non-underlined portion is Singular (Division), so singular verb must be used. Placement of comparison marker "unlike other numbers of periods" is incorrect. Moreover there is no need to use BEING. Incorrect