OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONgeneris
Project SC Butler: Day 169: Sentence Correction (SC1)
In times of economic difficulty, young adults and old people tend to live with other family members and not
to maintain separate households, with implications for businesses that sell vacuum cleaners and dishwashers.
(A) to maintain separate households,
with implications for businesses that sell
(B)
[to] maintain different households, which has implications for businesses selling
(C) to maintain separate households, a fact with implications for businesses that sell
(D) to maintain households
that are separate, a fact
that has implications for businesses selling
(E)
[to] maintain different households, and
this has implications for businesses selling
• PROCESS OF ELIMINATION• Split #1: the missing antecedentIn option A, "with implications" is not solidly connected to anything.
--
What has implications? The idea expressed in the previous clause—but the idea is not a noun.
-- does
with modify
households? No.
-- prepositional modifiers are versatile, but within reason. A
something has implications. What something?
Option B uses the classic GMAT trap:
which cannot modify (refer to) an entire clause.
-- the issue is similar to that in (A)
--
which must refer to a noun. There is none.
Option E similarly and incorrectly has no antecedent for
this (which is an adjective that should refer to a noun).
-- so far, exactly one question that I know of allows
this as a standalone pronoun. (We should see "this" point to a noun, such as "this fact")
Eliminate A, B, and E
• Split #2: concision and clarity(C) to maintain separate households, a fact with implications for businesses that sell
(D) to maintain households
that are separate, a fact
that has implications for businesses selling
Style ("diction") decisions can be hard.
If one sentence says the same thing as another but does so more economically and both are grammatical, choose the economical sentence.
No reason exists to change "maintain separate households" to "maintain households that are separate."
Changing "with" to "that has" is not as bothersome, but "with" is still more efficient.
Option C is better than Option D.
Eliminate D.
The answer is (C)• Notes• Summative modifier — a few words that summarize the preceding clause so that noun-modifiers apply
You don't need to remember the jargon, but you do need to remember that this pattern is fairly common:
If a clause contains an idea or event or fact that is not stated outright, we can make up a noun that
summarizes the clause.
Then a noun modifier has a noun [a something] to modify.
("Summarizes" - hence the word "summative" modifier.")
The noun that was added in (C) and that encapsulates (summarizes) the idea expressed by the preceding clause is "a fact."
• Parallelism?"Not" gets in the way.
The word "to" needs to be repeated because the parallelism marker AND connects back to
tend to live, /i] but [tend to maintain] is interrupted by "not."
Absolutely clear: . . . [i]tend TO live with family members and [tend] not TO maintain separate households.Often the TO will distribute to two or three verbs .
But in this sentence, "not" gets in the way.
If we let the "tend to" simply distribute in options B and E, we get . . .
tend to live with others and
[tend to] not maintain separate households.
But
to not maintain is not standard. The
not should go before the infinitive.
That is, the standard construction in English is
not to [verb]. Options B and E give us
to not [verb].The constructions in B and E are not as good as those that repeat
to and place it after
not.
Option C is clearer than B and E are.
COMMENTS nehasomani33 and
nehasomani33 , welcome to SC Butler.
At couple of you reasoned well but chose the wrong answer.
Kuaos to that group, and to all who explained.