A) Tom Cochran, a former chief technology officer of Atlantic Media,
calculates the mid-sized firm’s spending that was more than $1m a year on processing e-mails, with each one costing on average around 95 cents in labour costs.
B) Tom Cochran, a former chief technology officer from Atlantic Media,
tried to calculate, the mid-sized firm was spending more than $1m a year in processing e-mails, with each one costing on average around 95 cents in labour costs.
C)
Former chief technology officer of Atlantic Media, Tom Cochran, calculated that the mid-sized firm was spending more than $1m a year in processing e-mails, for each one’s cost averaging around 95 cents in labour costs.
D)
Tom Cochran, a former chief technology officer of Atlantic Media, calculated that the mid-sized firm was spending more than $1m a year on processing e-mails, with each one costing on average around 95 cents in labour costs.
E)
Former chief technology officer of Atlantic Media, Tom Cochran, calculated that the mid-sized firm was spending more than $1m a year to process e-mails, with each one’s cost averaging around 95 cents in labour costs.
The action is already done, estimation is already been calculated. So calculates/ tried to calculate is wrong in here, Eliminate A and B.
The parallelism used in C and E is ambiguous. Former CTO at atlantic media, who they are refering to?
The Subject should be before to address the position here it is followed after.
D is showing the clear meaning of the sentence,
Tom Cochran, a former chief technology officer of Atlantic Media. (statement 1)
Tom Cochran, calculated that the mid-sized firm was spending........ (statement 2) {the meaning are quiet clear as well the parallelism addressed}
Answer must be D