OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
As a result of the ongoing budgetary crisis, city officials have begun to
insist that all unnecessary spending is curtailed for the foreseeable future.
• COMMAND SUBJUNCTIVE ("mandative subjunctive") -- the verb
insistThe verb
insist is a clue that the subjunctive is required.
Certain "bossy" and other verbs require a very specific construction called "command subjunctive" or "mandative subjunctive."
I do not care what you call the construction. Some people like terminology. Others do not.
For an overview of the command subjunctive, please read
THIS post by GMAT Club founder
bb .
→ We construct the command subjunctive this way:
bossy verb + THAT + noun + bare infinitive
-- The judge insisted that the jurors
be sequestered.
-- Did she insist that everyone
go into the tornado shelter?
The bare infinitive is simply the infinitive without the word "to."
Infinitive: To curtail
Bare infinitive: curtail
Except for the verb
to be, the subjunctive construction can seem deceptively simple because it does not sound strange when the noun/subject is
I, you, or
we, because the conjugated verb and the bare infinitive are the same in those cases.
→ These examples do not sound jarring.
The judge insisted that I approach the bench.The judge insists that you answer the attorney's question.The judge insisted that we sequester ourselves.→ These examples do sound jarring, but they are used in U.S. formal writing frequently.
The judge insisted that he approach the bench. (Strange because the third person is usually "approaches.")
The judge insisted that she be on time. (Strange because the "be" part of "to be" is used rather than
is)
Each options presents a different way in which GMAC may try to trick you.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) [C]ity officials have begun to
insist that all unnecessary spending is curtailed for the foreseeable future.
• verb error
→ the subjunctive
be should replace
is in this option
→ we cannot use the "regular" indicative verb tense because the latter is not a bare infinitive.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) [C]ity officials have begun to
insist that all unnecessary spending should be curtailed for the foreseeable future.
• Do not use the word
should in command subjunctive constructions.
→ A command already implies a
should.
→ In British English,
should is allowed. Not so in the U.S.. Not so on the GMAT.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C)[C]ity officials have begun to
insist on all unnecessary spending to be curtailed for the foreseeable future.
• verb error
→ the infinitive (
to be), like the indicative, is not allowed in the command subjunctive construction.
• idiom error -
insist on must be paired with a gerund (a verbING)
→ Correct: After he accidentally spilled coffee, the apologetic waiter insisted on
paying for the woman's jacket to be dry-cleaned.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) [C]ity officials have begun to
insist that all unnecessary spending be curtailed for the foreseeable future.
• correct
• This option follows the correct structure, namely
insist + that + unnecessary spending + (bare infinitive) be curtailed
KEEP
Quote:
E) [C]ity officials have begun to
insist on all unnecessary spending is curtailed for the foreseeable future.
• verb error
→ we should use
be rather than
is→ does not follow the command subjunctive's correct construction
•
insist on should be followed by gerund (a verbING) ("spending" is not the right gerund here)
Correct:
City officials have begun to insist on mask wearing in grocery stores.ELIMINATE E
The correct answer is D.• Takeaways1) Use
insist + ON + gerund (verbing)
or
2) Use
insist + that + noun/subject + bare infinitive
When #2 is used, in U.S. English and on the GMAT,
should must never be a part of the construction.
A command already implies "should."
When #2 is used, employ only the bare infinitive.
→ any other verb tense or verb phrase is incorrect
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