OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click Here THE PROMPTThe actors in The Mystery of Edwin Drood have become known as
a prime example of the interaction between performers with the audience.
• Meaning?
→ Some actors in a particular play have become known for the way in which they interact with the audience.
• Idiom, frequently tested: Between X
AND Y
→ Between serves as a "connecting" preposition that couples
performers and
the audience.
The correct idiomatic structure is
Between X and Y.X = performers
Y = the audience
• Agreement: Often, in cases that involve a plural noun (
actors), a linking verb or the word
as (
have become known as), and another noun (
examples), style and diction are better served when the nouns agree.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A)
a prime example of the interaction
between performers
with• Incorrect construction / idiom:
with in
between X with Y is incorrect
→ Whenever you see
between, and
between connects Thing One (X) and Thing Two (Y) you need the word AND.
• Agreement - the singular
a prime example does not agree with the plural
actors.Although this disagreement is not fatal as is the disagreement between a plural noun and a singular pronoun, such disagreement is not preferred.
The preference that
actors and
examples agree stems partially from this particular context.
The verb phrase "have become known as" functions very nearly as a linking verb does: there is a tacit "equals" sign between
actors and
examples.
Use the preference to break ties.
Eliminate A
Quote:
B)
a prime example of the
interaction of performers and
•
interaction of X and Y is incorrect
→ we need
between, not
of→ interaction between X and Y is the dominant collocation—and the one you are likely to see on the GMAT.
See, for example, the definition and sentence examples
here.
• Agreement - the singular
a prime example does not agree with the plural
actors.ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C)
being prime examples of the
interaction of performers
with•
being is useless
→ editor's test: remove the word "being." Does the sentence still make sense? Yes? Then you do not need being. It is useless.
•
interaction of X with Y is incorrect
→ we need
between, not
of→ we need
and, not
withELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) prime examples of the interaction
between performers
with• Incorrect construction / idiom
→ Just as is the case in option A, we need Between X (performers)
and Y (the audience), not
with Quote:
E)
prime examples of the interaction between performers
and• I do not see any errors
•
prime examples, plural, agrees with
actors, plural ("Actors have become prime examples . . . )
• the correct idiom is used: Between performers and the audience
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