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Argument essay - 5/6
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Anyone please help evaluate. Appreciate the response. Thanks,
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Thanks gmat1220.
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Hey bijugm, I will review your issue essay. The argument essay is pretty good.
In the issue pls keep an eye on the length of text. I believe this is not 350 words or more. I sense a scope shift - the essay was not "process vs final result". It says "business and organizations" is reaching success and benchmarks. Are they doing wrong or injustice, disservice to the society or environment? The most appropriate examples are the organizations whose avarice and malpractices destroy the environment and harm the people, economy and nation. e.g Lehman Brothers bankruptcy in 2008, if you have seen Erin Brokovich (Pacific gas and Electric company litigation in 1996), Enron case 2001, to name a few. Use them in the examples :-)

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Thanks again Gmat1220. Really helpful
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No problem ! cheers

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