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AWA Score: 5.5 - 6 out of 6

Coherence and connectivity: 5/5
This rating corresponds to the flow of ideas and expressions from one paragraph to another. The effective use of connectives and coherence of assertive language in arguing for/against the argument is analyzed. This is deemed as one of the most important parameters.

Paragraph structure and formation: 4.5/5
The structure and division of the attempt into appropriate paragraphs are evaluated. To score well on this parameter, it is important to organize the attempt into paragraphs. Preferable to follow the convention of leaving a line blank at the end of each paragraph, to make the software aware of the structure of the essay.

Vocabulary and word expression: 4.5/5
This parameter rates the submitted essay on the range of relevant vocabulary possessed by the candidate basis the word and expression usage. There are no extra- points for bombastic word usage. Simple is the best form of suave!

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The aforementioned column from the popular entertainment magazine concludes that producers of the forthcoming movie 3003 will be mostly likely to maximize their profits if they pay Robin Good several million dollars to star in it, based on Robin Good's record of starring in financially successful films. The argument at first glance may seem to be logical. However, upon further examination of the argument and its underlying structure, a number of flaws become evident.

Firstly, the argument fails to establish any causal relationship between paying Robin Good several million dollars to star in the film and the film's financial success. The argument does not provide essential information such as Robin Good's acting skills, the genre of movies he has worked in, budget of the previous films he starred in, thus not aiding the reader to understand the reason for starring Robin Good in the forthcoming movie. Based on the structure of the argument, it seems that the mere presence of Robin Good is sufficient for the film's success. The argument fails to justify whether, it was only Robin Good who can be credited with the financial success of his previous movies.

Secondly, the argument assumes that film's financial success is equivalent to having their profits maximized. It is possible that in the previous films that Robin Good starred in earned huge revenues but only made marginal profits, due to the high budget incurred during production. Further, the argument fails to provide a clear meaning of a financially successful film.

Thirdly, the argument fails to consider various other factors that affect the film's success, such as storyline, cinematography, music etcetera. The argument also fails to consider that the presence of other actors and actresses also significantly affect the movie's popularity. It is possible that Robin Good may not be suitable for the role in the forthcoming movie. The argument also fails to address the number of movies starring Robin Good which did not do well financially.

Had the argument managed to address the aforementioned concerns, both its persuasive ability and apparent legitimacy would have been greatly reinforced. However, the argument in its current form is simply a hasty generalization filled with overreaching assumptions and deficiencies in information.
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