Hi A1701883,
I'm sorry to hear that Test Day didn't go as well as planned. When these types of score drops occur, the two likely "causes" involve either something that was unrealistic during practice or something that was surprising (or not accounted for) on Test Day. With Verbal Scaled Scores of V23 and V20, you would have lost significant points in all 3 major Verbal categories (RC, SC and CR). Before we discuss any of those potential issues though, I'll still need additional information on how you've been studying and your goals:
Studies:
1) On what dates did you take your 2 Official GMATs and how did you score on each attempt (including the Quant and Verbal Scaled Scores for each)?
2) How long have you studied? How many hours do you typically study each week?
3) What study materials have you used so far?
4) On what dates did you take EACH of your CATs/mocks and how did you score on EACH (including the Quant and Verbal Scaled Scores for EACH)?
Goals:
5) When are you planning to apply to Business School?
6) What Schools are you planning to apply to?
GMAT assassins aren't born, they're made,
Rich