Would appreciate any feedback regarding my approach to my first waitlist letter:
In the first two paragraphs, I explain that school X remains my top choice and that I will absolutely accept if given the opportunity. Also, I mention that I live within 2 miles of campus and thus can be available with little advance notice. I also discuss a recently scheduled class visit/tour to reiterate my interest (I interviewed with alum in a different state)
In the next paragraphs, I provide two
new reasons why I'm a unique fit for the school. This includes a certification that I didn't talk much about in the original app and wanting to run for a chair position that involves the skill. Also, I explain that the likely underrepresented industry I'm from is based on a unique business model that I could provide insight into (is this going too far?)
Next, I discuss a bonus I received at work before moving across the country and the management-related contribution I made to get the bonus.
Finally, I add some information about my involvement in community service in our new hometown, which is directly related to other community service I've done in the past.
One main question is: Should I spend any more time telling them why exactly they're my number one choice, or at this stage is it likely more about what I can do for them? Again, any comments would be greatly appreciated because without feedback about why I'm on the waitlist I feel like I'm completely in the dark!
Thanks much!