Bunuel
Written in 1961, Joseph Heller scored a literary hit with his comedic first novel, Catch-22.A. Written in 1961, Joseph Heller scored a literary hit with his comedic first novel,
Catch-22.
B. Written in 1961, Joseph Heller scored a literary hit with
Catch-22, his comedic first novel.
C. Written in 1961,
Catch-22, the comedic first novel by Joseph Heller, was a literary hit.
D.
Catch-22, which was written in 1961 by Joseph Heller, scored a literary hit with his comedic first novel.
E.
Catch-22, the comedic first novel, scored a literary hit for Joseph Heller by its being written in 1961.
OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
Here’s How to Crack ItAs you read the sentence for the first time, go through your checklist. Is there a pronoun error in the sentence? No. Does the sentence begin with a modifying phrase? Yes. Now we’re getting somewhere. Let’s check to see if the modifying phrase actually modifies what it is supposed to. Does it? No. “Joseph Heller” is not what was written in 1961. This is a misplaced modifier.
Now that you’ve spotted the error, look through the other answer choices and eliminate any that contain the same error. Choice B contains the same error. Get rid of it. You’re down to choices C, D, and E.
Now, there are really only two ways to fix this kind of error, as you know. Do any of the answer choices change the noun that follows the modifying phrase? Yes, answer choice C. This is probably the right answer. Read through the other two choices just to make sure there’s nothing better. Choices D and E contain awkward constructions.
Choice C is the “best” answer.