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In constructing the work, the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern -- the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy.


(A) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern -- the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy.

(B) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern -- the pattern of drapery rather than anatomy.

(C) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern -- the pattern of drapery rather than of anatomy.

(D) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern; the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy.

(E) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern; the pattern of drapery rather than of anatomy.




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A: Use "rather than" over "instead of" to establish preference

B: Improper parallelism: "pattern of"

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DE: Incorrect usage of semicolon: no verb in the clause
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In constructing the work,
the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern
-- the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy.


The semi-colon (;) is used to list things or to join two independent clauses (complete sentences).
Since the second part of the sentence is not an independent clause, use of semi-colon (;) is incorrect.
Options D & E are incorrect

Use of instead of is also incorrect since the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy does not provide correct comparison.
Option A is incorrect

Quote:
(A) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern -- the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy.
Use of instead of is also incorrect since the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy does not provide correct comparison.
Incorrect

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(B) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern -- the pattern of drapery rather than anatomy.
the pattern of drapery rather than anatomy. is not parallel.
Incorrect

Quote:
(C) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern -- the pattern of drapery rather than of anatomy.
Use of -- is correct
the pattern of drapery rather than of anatomy is also correctly parallel.
Correct

Quote:
(D) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern; the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy.
Use of instead of is also incorrect since the pattern of drapery instead of anatomy does not provide correct comparison.
The semi-colon (;) is used to list things or to join two independent clauses (complete sentences).
Since the second part of the sentence is not an independent clause, use of semi-colon (;) is incorrect.
Incorrect

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(E) the artists were preoccupied with proportion and pattern; the pattern of drapery rather than of anatomy.
semi-colon (;) is used to list things or to join two independent clauses (complete sentences).
Since the second part of the sentence is not an independent clause, use of semi-colon (;) is incorrect.
Incorrect

IMO C
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