OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Quote:
At a conference on the origins of language, the complexity of tools 1.75 million years old
were said to suggest a level of human development inconceivable unless they had language.
A)
were said to suggest a level of human development inconceivable unless
they had language
B)
were said to suggest that without language
their level of human development was not conceivable
C) was said to
be suggestive of a level of human development
not conceivable without languageD) was said to suggest a level of human development inconceivable unless
they had language
E) was said to suggest a level of human development inconceivable without language
• Split #1: subject verb agreementGMAC frequently traps aspirants by "hiding the subject" in a long noun phrase.
The subject is
complexity, singular—not
tools, plural.
In options A and B, the plural verb
were does not match the singular subject,
complexityELIMINATE OPTIONS A AND B
• Split #2 - the case of the Missing NounOptions A, B, and D all use pronouns that have no antecedent nouns.
Options A and D incorrectly use
they. Who are
they?Option B incorrectly uses
their. Same problem: no noun could be the antecedent of
their.
Eliminate D. (Options A and B are already eliminated.)
• Split #3: meaning and comparing styleSuggestive of v. suggestIf X is suggestive of Y, then X makes you think about Y.
Suggestive of in option C means
reminiscent of.
By contrast,
to suggest in (D) means
to show indirectly or
to indicate (something).
This difference is slight, and not one that I would use as a basis for elimination unless I were down to two answers, as is the case now.
Not conceivable without vs. inconceivable withoutThe phrase
not conceivable without language in option C does not flow as well as the phrase
inconceivable without language in (E).
→ Although both contain double negatives, option E avoids using
not and
without in the same phrase.
→→ In general,
inconceivable without or
impenetrable without or
unbearable without are much less "jerky" than
not conceivable without or
not penetrable without or
not bearable without.That distinction does not hold all of the time, but "not" and "without" in the same phrase is usually not great phrasing.
Ultimately, we compare C and E and decide which one is better.
The strong, accurate verb in E (suggest) is better than the not quite accurate adjective (suggestive of) in C.
And option E's avoidance of
not and
without in the same phrase is better than the construction in C in which
not ___ without is awkward.
Eliminate C.
The answer is E.COMMENTSgauri123456 , welcome to SC Butler.
You all seem to have trusted your good instincts when choosing between C and E.
Nicely done all around. Kudos to all.