Over the past 14 years as an admissions consultant, I’ve noticed that many applicants begin their MBA essays with a quote from a famous personality, perhaps hoping to impress the admission committee or to create a powerful opening.
Quoting a renowned leader, scientist, or philosopher may seem like a thoughtful way to set the tone. But it often adds little value, and sometimes even takes away from the essay’s purpose.
🎯 The goal of MBA essays is to understand you: your goals, values, experiences, and motivations. When you start with a quote from someone else, you shift the focus away from yourself. More importantly, you use up precious word count to spotlight another person, not yourself.
Take this example:
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Before:
‘We must believe that we are gifted for something and that this thing, at whatever cost, must be attained.’ – Marie Curie”
Post-MBA, I will assume a CTO role with XXX...
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After:
“My post-MBA goal is to take up the CTO role with XXX and contribute to business development and operations strategy...”
The revised version is direct, focused, and completely about the applicant. It doesn’t lean on borrowed words. It demonstrates initiative and intention from the outset.
💡 In today’s world of tighter word limits, every word should shine a light on you: your journey, your aspirations, and your potential.
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13 common mistakes applicants make in their MBA goals essay and how to avoid them.
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