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Perfectly screened out contenders B and D.

Now I here want one more reason toe eliminate B from winning race- parallelism error.

D is the best out of the given choices, though but is missing from second clause. This is acceptable for this problem.

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Because they could not keep up with people’s divine communication needs through animal mummification, not only did the Egyptian priests farm the “sacred” animals for slaughter, but also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treating the holy ceremony as a business.

A.but also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treating

B. but also cheated their wealthy customers, used empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treated

C. but also cheated their wealthy customers, using empty wrappings, partial animals, and cheaper substitutes, and treating

D. they also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treated

E. they also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treating

here D is the right answer and E is wrong cus using "using and treating" cant be logically parallel as it distorts the meaning.
if E were correct then it would mean the priests cheated the customers by doing 2 things 1. using abcd and 2. treating xyz. why can this not be right?
In D we are making cheating and treating two separate clauses. but that's not necessary right? it can be that they cheated the customer by doing X and Y (what E says)
Going too mechanical here surely harm your progress in SC, especially when we deal with idioms
There are quite a few decision points
I would start with "Treating" vs "Treated"
cheated their wealthy customers by treating the holy ceremony as a business- Does not make sense
How they cheated their wealthy customers - By Treating the holy ceremony as a business- meaningless
So treating should be replaced with "Treated"
Next Decision point is "Does of the action" to make the entity parallel
Not only did X(Plural).....But also (they)
D fits perfect
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In options A,B and C, this portion 'not only did the Egyptian priests .....but also cheated their wealthy customers' seems correct. But the above mentioned formation is 'not only+verb+sub......but also+verb+object'. Ask yourself, did their wealthy customers cheat themselves? No, the priest is the subject and cheated their wealthy customers. That's why, these options fail to maintain parallelism.

Between option D and E, there is a meaning error in option E.
The priests cheated their customers ..by treating the holy ceremony as a business. Is it logical? No.

Therefore, Option D is the correct one.
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Can you please help... As per my understanding, the idiom is also an essential part of the sentence correction techniques and often we discard the choices when we have idiomatic error. How come Option D holds correct?
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Can i please get the P.O.E for this question?
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Not only should accompany 'but' right? I do not see that in Option in D?
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Im unable to understand why D is correct,


the Correct idiom is Not only.... But Also .


not - Not Only ..... They Also
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indeed the choice D is better than any other choice presented in the question. However, IMO the choice D itself seems to be flawed because of the following reasons:
1. incorrect idiom not only X but also Y construction is missing.
2. Independent clause "they also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treated" is connected with previous IC by just a comma. Instead there should be Comma+FANBOY.

In terms of parallelism choice D is the only correct choice.
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