Krishchamp
Hello,
Krishchamp. Although I was not named above, I happened to stumble across your query on the very day in which I came across a question on a different test that presented the same sort of structure. The following comes from Practice Test 3 of the SAT, and The College Board owns the rights:
Not only were such regulations meant to ensure the efficiency of the business and the safety of the workers, but they also helped to raise people's generally low opinion of the restaurant industry.I bring up the line to point out that in such a construct, when the noun discussed in the
not only... [but] also frame follows
not only, it
must be named or referred to after
[but] also to create a valid sentence. That is, without
they in the sentence above, the entire sentence breaks down. This differs from when the noun precedes the idiomatic construct. Compare:
Such regulations not only were meant to ensure the efficiency of the business and the safety of the workers, but also helped to raise people's generally low opinion of the restaurant industry.In the second sentence, inserting
they in the second half of the sentence is unnecessary. The idiomatic construct is used in a different manner: noun + not only A + [but] also B.
All of this is to say that in the sentence we are dealing with here,
the Egyptian priests follows
not only, so we need to find a matching noun/pronoun in the second half of the construct for the sentence to be valid.
Kritisood
Because they could not keep up with people’s divine communication needs through animal mummification, not only did the Egyptian priests farm the “sacred” animals for slaughter,
but also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treating the holy ceremony as a business.
A.
but also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treating
B.
but also cheated their wealthy customers, used empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and treated
C.
but also cheated their wealthy customers, using empty wrappings, partial animals, and cheaper substitutes, and treating
D.
they also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and
treatedE.
they also cheated their wealthy customers by using empty wrappings, partial animals, or cheaper substitutes, and
treatingChoices (A) through (C) all fail to provide a proper subject to carry over from the first part of the sentence, so they are easy to eliminate. Between (D) and (E), a quick phrase check at the end allows us to rule out (E), since it would need
by to precede
treating to create a parallel action to
by using:
by using A, B, or C, and by treating... Finally, if you were wondering about the omission of
but in choices (D) and (E), the idiom can appear either way, both on the GMAT™ and elsewhere. In all, the question took me 44 seconds to answer with complete confidence. Experience has taught me what to look for in such a sentence, and I am hoping to share that knowledge with you.
Good luck with your studies.
- Andrew