OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONgeneris
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Before they became a team, Richard Rogers and Oscar Hammerstein wrote a series of hit musicals in the 1950s and collaborating with other partners: Rogers with Lorenz Hart and Hammerstein with Jerome Kern.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Richard Rogers and Oscar Hammerstein wrote a series of hit musicals in the 1950s and collaborating
• collaborating is not a working verb, nor is it parallel to
wrote→
collaborating should be
collaboratedELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) Richard Rogers and Oscar Hammerstein, whose series of hit musicals in the 1950s had collaborated
• Musicals do not collaborate. Full stop.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) Richard Rogers and Oscar Hammerstein, who wrote a series of hit musicals in the 1950s, collaborating
• The sentence lacks a main verb
• The compound subject (Richard Rogers and Oscar Hammerstein) does not have a verb
→ the verb
wrote belongs to the relative pronoun
who (remove the nonessential who-clause -- the sentence should still makes sense, but it does not)
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) Richard Rogers and Oscar Hammerstein, who wrote a series of hit musicals in the 1950s and had collaborated
• the sentence lacks a main verb
→ similar to
wrote in option C the verbs
wrote and
had collaborated belong to
who, the subject of the relative clause, rather than to the main subjects
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) Richard Rogers and Oscar Hammerstein, who wrote a series of hit musicals in the 1950s, had collaborated
• I see no errors
• Unlike options C and D, in this sentence, when the nonessential clause is removed, the sentence makes sense
• This option correctly describes two actions in the past:
(1) Rogers and Hammerstein worked with other partners; and
(2) Rogers and Hammerstein became a team.
The use of past perfect (
had collaborated), a tense that is used to convey the earlier of two past events, is correct.
The answer is ECOMMENTSI will post the other OE within 12 hours.
KaramveerBakshi and
Varunsawhney8 , welcome to SC Butler.
Many more people than I anticipated saw right through option D, btw.
Someone asked the other day whether I write these SC questions.
No, not these ones that I post on Butler.
I do spend many long hours looking for them, though.
Writing SC questions is a Herculean task. You should try writing one.
GMAC spends thousands of dollars to produce one SC question.
These answers range from good to excellent.
Those of you who take a few words to explain what you mean make learning easier for aspirants to follow. Well done.