IHateTheGMAT wrote:
I was the one that first mentioned not liking the passion essay but as I've thought about it and looked back at all my drafts I'm concerned also. I agree with sterny and others. It is nearly impossible to get good balance with these essays. The passion essay was tough, but it was also the only real opportunity to talk about something personal and non work related. I now see nowhere to talk about ECs/personal interests etc. Right now my esssays are all career. there is no balance. As someone stated earlier -
Essay 1 - Professional
Essay 2 - Professional. I guess it's technically possible to talk about an EC here but I don't see how and I don't think it would make for a very compelling essay or answer the question very well.
Essay 3 - For most people this will also be professional. But even if it's non professional it's a failure essay. It's not a chance to talk about ECs you really enjoy, or your leadership successes in those ECs, etc.
If you throw out essay 1 because it's a forward looking goals essay and every school has one, we only have 2 essays to talk about our accomplishments/leadership/work/ECs and one of those two essays is a failure essay!!
I wanted to give you my take on this. As an overall suggestion, I would say think outside the box just a little bit. Don't be pigeonholed by the exact words of the essay prompts.
To begin with, why do you say, throw out essay 1? That's nuts! Try to think a little beyond the rigid nature of the question. This is not designed to be a call and response type of exercise.
Question: What is your short-term goal?
Answer: Get a job as a management consultant
Question: What is your long-term goal?
Answer: Start my own consulting company
I realize this is a gross exaggeration, but I'm just trying to get my point across. You can't talk about your ST and LT goals without talking about what you have already done. RIGHT? Why do you want to be a banker, a consultant, or a brand manager? What life steps have you taken that lead you up to this decision to get an MBA? At some point, you said I want to do "X.” What caused you want to do that? Are you good at something? Do you already have some skills but lack others? A key thing that you need to do is talk about your experiences. There is definitely room in the word count to briefly discuss leadership.
"I worked on Project X in which I implemented a process improvement system. I was the project manager and worked with 3 different divisions and management teams to facilitate the process, design the system, and implement the solution. That's when I knew that I wanted to be a management consultant. I have raw leadership abilities that I need to cultivate as well as build a fundamental business background as my foundation. The next step is an MBA from CBS. etc, etc. Now I didn't make that very articulate or use my best grammar, but that was 79 words. 671 to still use elsewhere.
Also, what about Essay 2. Why can't you talk about leadership in this essay? Do you not have leadership examples from your own practical experience? Again, you don't need to talk about leadership activities for 500 words, but there is definitely room.
Finally, as far as EC's go, Columbia has a specific section in their application for you to discuss college EC's and post-college EC's. You don't get a ton of space, but enough to get a main point across.
Hope this helps.
Cheers,
ryguy