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Re: Compared with those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories [#permalink]
(A) those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories that are relatively low, containing little fat, but they are -- wrong comparison

(B) other nuts and seeds, chestnuts, containing little fat, are relatively low in calories, but are

(C) other nuts and seeds, the calories in chestnuts are relatively low, and they contain little fat, but they are -- wrong comparison

(D) the calories in other nuts and seeds, in chestnuts the calories are relatively low and contain little fat, but are-- wrong comparison

(E) in other nuts and seeds, chestnuts contain little fat, are relatively low in calories, but --AWKWARD
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Re: Compared with those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories [#permalink]
(B) Compared with other nuts and seeds, chestnuts, containing little fat, are relatively low in calories, but are rich sources of minerals, vitamins and phytonutrients that immensely benefit health.

How can B be right?

Conjunction but joins two independent clauses. Second clause does not have a subject
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(B) Compared with other nuts and seeds, chestnuts, containing little fat, are relatively low in calories, but are rich sources of minerals, vitamins and phytonutrients that immensely benefit health.

How can B be right?

Conjunction but joins two independent clauses. Second clause does not have a subject



Danish,

only B have correct comparison of nuts with nuts

if you break sentence further
Chestnuts are relatively low in calories
Chestnuts are rich sources of minerals,vitamins and .........

Compared with other nuts and seeds, chestnuts, containing little fat, are relatively low in calories, but are rich sources of minerals, vitamins and phytonutrients that immensely benefit health.
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Re: Compared with those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories [#permalink]
Is option b correct because , after according to rule, but followed by comma should be a independent clause and here it is not.
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Re: Compared with those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories [#permalink]
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Is option b correct because , after according to rule, but followed by comma should be a independent clause and here it is not.


Completely accept your views , but for GMAT SC our approach must to select the best among the rest , here option (B) stands out among the rest and is hence correct...

Also consider the idiomatic form Compared with X , Y ( To emphasize differences )

Hence, (B) is best among the rest of the options and is our answer...
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VKat wrote:
Is option b correct because , after according to rule, but followed by comma should be a independent clause and here it is not.


Your query has already been answered by Abhishek above. Also note that I have not come across any official question that is eliminated only because of punctuation error.

( However, another way to look at option B is that there are three verbs in a list. It is optional to use comma before "and" when there are more than two items. In that respect, comma is alright)
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Re: Compared with those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories [#permalink]
Compared with those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories that are relatively low, containing little fat, but they are rich sources of minerals, vitamins, and phytonutrients that immensely benefit health.


(A) those of other nuts and seeds, chestnuts have calories that are relatively low, containing little fat, but they are
Comarison issue between those of other nuts and seeds and chestnuts.

(B) other nuts and seeds, chestnuts, containing little fat, are relatively low in calories, but are
No errors

(C) other nuts and seeds, the calories in chestnuts are relatively low, and they contain little fat, but they are
Comarison issue between other nuts and seeds and the calories in chestnuts.

(D) the calories in other nuts and seeds, in chestnuts the calories are relatively low and contain little fat, but are
No subject for clause are rich sources of minerals

(E) in other nuts and seeds, chestnuts contain little fat, are relatively low in calories, but
parallelism issue contain, are, but rich sources.
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