avigutman
jabhatta2
Why include that phrase (For their union) in the conclusion, if the editor does not want or hope or expect that the union eventually proceed with the cuts in retirement benefits
The union is mentioned in the conclusion because it has the authority to accept or reject the cuts in the retirement benefits.
The argument isn't claiming that the union will or won't or should or shouldn't do anything, jabhatta2.
The argument is merely claiming that
if the union was to accept the cuts, such a move would be in the employees' best interest.
Does the author claim that the union should accept the cuts? No. Does the author claim that the union will accept the cuts? No.Therefore, the argument doesn't depend on any assumptions about the union. The claim isn't about the union. Rather, it's about what would or wouldn't be in the employees' best interest.
Hi
avigutman – I think I am struggling to swallow the bits in yellow.
I keep bringing in the intentions of the union
ITSELF for some reason or the other (I don’t know).
Remember in CR - every phrase -- is critical and every phrase is placed for a
reasonIn fact - the moment I remove the phrase “
for their union” from the argument (Screenshot below) – I THEN BELIEVE WHAT you say in the yellow bits above.
Then only I can see why (a) and (e) are irrelevant
But the phrase is there and is confusing
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