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I selected E

A) "the more the gap" does not make sense. same for B and D
C) "they" have no clear antecedant, it cannot function as a placeholder

Even though many people say that fasting helps reduce fat, in reality it is observed that the more the gap between the meals is, the more is the probability of accumulating fat.
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Even though many people say that fasting helps reduce fat, in reality it is observed that the more the gap between the meals is, the more is the probability of accumulating fat.

A. many people say that fasting helps reduce fat, in reality it is observed that the more the gap between the meals is, the more is

B. it is said that fasting helps in reducing fat, in reality it is observed that the more the gap between the meals is, the more is

C. they say that fasting helps to reduce fat, in reality it is observed that the greater the gap between the meals, the greater

D. it is said that fasting helps reduce fat, in reality the observation is that the more the gap between the meals, the higher

E. it is said that fasting helps in reducing fat, in reality it is observed that the greater the gap between the meals is, the greater is




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A. In the parallel structure “even though X, Y”, X = “many people say” and Y = “it is observed”. Since both are clauses, grammatically the construction is not wrong altogether. Nonetheless, structurally it would be better to use the following: X = “it is said”, Y = “it is observed”. Therefore, structurally and stylistically “Even though it said…, in reality it is observed…” is better than “ Even though many people say… in reality it is observed…”.

Here both “gap”* and “probability” are uncountable nouns themselves, but they are quantity words. For such uncountable nouns that are quantity words, the correct adjective is “greater”. It is wrong to use “ more” with such quantity words.

[* “Gap” can be countable in other situations, but here it's a quantity word and hence uncountable - for example, here it would be wrong to say “more gaps between the meals” (more + countable) or “more gap between the meals” (more + uncountable quantity word).) The correct usage here is “greater gap between the meals” (greater + uncountable quantity word).]

B. As explained in A, “more” is the wrong adjective for “gap” and “probability”. For uncountable nouns that are quantity words, the correct adjective is “greater”.

C. The pronoun “they” does have a proper antecedent.

Moreover in the parallel structure “even though X, Y”, X = “they say” and Y = “it is observed”. Since both are clauses, grammatically the construction is not wrong altogether. Nonetheless, structurally it would be better to use the following: X = “it is said”, Y = “it is observed”. Therefore, structurally and stylistically “Even though it said…, in reality it is observed…” is better than “ Even though they say… in reality it is observed…”.

D. In the parallel structure “even though X, Y”, X = “it is said” and Y = “the observation is”. Since both are clauses, grammatically the construction is not wrong altogether. Nonetheless, structurally it would be better to use the following: X = “it is said”, Y = “it is observed”. Therefore, structurally and stylistically “Even though it is said…, in reality it is observed…” is better than “ Even though it is said… in reality the observation is…”.

“More” is the wrong adjective for “gap”, because “ gap” is here an uncountable quantity word.

E. CORRECT. In the parallel structure “even though X, Y”, X = “it is said” and Y = “it is observed”. The construction is grammatically correct and stylistically most appropriate.

The correct adjective “greater” is used for the uncountable quantity words “gap” and “probability”.

Note: Al the following usages are correct:
    1. “helps reduce”
    2. “helps to reduce”
    3. “helps in reducing”
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E. it is said that fasting helps in reducing fat, in reality it is observed that the greater the gap between the meals is, the greater is

I understand E is the best of them, but my question is whether perfect parallelism is maintained in E!
For example:
- The greater is the gap... The greater is the probability
or
-The greater the gap is... The greater the probability is

Or The structure is OK as it is?

GMATNinja Please help.
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I have the same question as that of nahid78

- The greater is the gap... The greater is the probability
or
-The greater the gap is... The greater the probability is

Which is better?

Additionally, can i say - "The grater the gap, greater is the probability...."
Thank you
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I have the same question as that of nahid78

- The greater is the gap... The greater is the probability
or
-The greater the gap is... The greater the probability is

Which is better?

Additionally, can i say - "The greater the gap, greater is the probability...."
Thank you

Hello glagad,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, "The greater the gap is... The greater the probability is" is the superior construction, as it is more direct.

Further, the construction "The greater the gap, greater is the probability...." is not correct, as the two halves are not parallel; the correct version of this construction is "the greater the gap, the greater the probability".

We hope this helps.
All the best!
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