Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers suing over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright in circumventing the company’s computer security system, trying to purchase massive blocks of tickets.


(A) Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers suing over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright in circumventing the company’s computer security system, trying to
accusing is not acts as verb.

(B) Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers, has sued over 30 people accusing it of deceit and breach of copyright for circumventing the company’s computer security system and trying to
Subject-verb error is adressed. Pronoun it is representing Event Exchange that is not correct.

(C) Event Exchange is trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers, suing over 30 people accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright, circumventing the company’s computer security system to try to
Using back to back modifier. not correct

(D) Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers, has sued over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright in circumventing the company’s computer security system to try to
No Remarks

(E) Event Exchange is trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers and suing over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright and circumventing the company’s security system to try and
Indicated both activities are parallel not reflecting intended meaning

IMO D
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Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers suing over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright in circumventing the company’s computer security system, trying to purchase massive blocks of tickets.


(A) Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers suing over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright in circumventing the company’s computer security system, trying to Incorrect

awkward construction, parallelism error, incomplete sentence

(B) Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers, has sued over 30 people accusing it of deceit and breach of copyright for circumventing the company’s computer security system and trying to Incorrect

accusing it who/which? over 30 people plural, so it uses wrong

(C) Event Exchange is trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers, suing over 30 people accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright, circumventing the company’s computer security system to try to Incorrect

parallelism error - ......trying ............, suing ........., circumventing ..........

(D) Event Exchange, trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers, has sued over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright in circumventing the company’s computer security system to try to Correct

(E) Event Exchange is trying to counter the predatory tactics used by some of the most advanced ticket scalpers and suing over 30 people, accusing them of deceit and breach of copyright and circumventing the company’s security system to try and Incorrect

to try to purchase - correct