Featured in Psychology and Evolution, a new study in which researcher Doel Judd suggesting that the very changes specific to human evolution may have come at a cost, a genetic architecture makes modern humans susceptible to schizophrenia.
A) Featured in Psychology and Evolution, a new study in which researcher Doel Judd suggesting that the very changes specific to human evolution may have come at a cost, a genetic architecture makes
Although the modifier "featured in psychology and evolution" correctly modifies " a new study", there are other errors-
first 'suggesting' should be a verb 'suggested' and 'makes' in the second half gives us to run -on sentencesB) Featured in Psychology and Evolution, researcher Doel Judd issued a new study, suggesting that the very specific changes in human evolution may have come at a cost, a genetic architecture making
modifier problem - "featured in psychology and evolution" should modify ' study' and not a ' researcher' and then there is awkward constructionC) In a new study featured in Psychology and Evolution, researcher Doel Judd has suggested changes that though very specific to human evolution may have come at a cost, making a genetic architecture that has made
modifier is correctly used - researcher is correctly modified by 'in a new study featured in psychology and evolution',
however placement of THAT after changes is wrong and the modifier ' making a genetic architecture that has made' is incorrectD) In a new study featured in Psychology and Evolution, researcher Doel Judd has suggested that the very changes specific to human evolution may have come at a cost, a genetic architecture making
CorrectE) In a new study featured in Psychology and Evolution, researcher Doel Judd has suggested that the very changes specific to human evolution have come at a cost, a genetic architecture that has made
'may have' has been changed to' have' thus changing the meaningD
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