Shortly after George Bernard Shaw joined the Fabian Society,
he took the position, which he held for the rest of his life, that income should be literally and absolutely equal for everybody, proclaiming with Marx that poverty was a crime and the capitalism robbery.
(A) the position, which he held for the rest of his life, that income should be literally and absolutely equal for everybody,
Looks fine. Keep.(B) the position, and held it for the rest of his life, that income should be literally and absolutely equal for everybody,
'and held it' is ambiguous.. 'It' could refer to the society or the position. Answer choice A is stronger.(C) the position, holding it for the rest of his life, of income being literally and absolutely equal for everybody,
Same reasoning as B.(D) a position that income must be literally and absolutely equal for everybody, and he held it for the rest of his life,
'a position' represents a plural amount. The meaning of the sentence suggests that there is only one position that George has taken.(E) a position that income must be literally and absolutely equal for everybody, holding it for the rest of his life and
Same reasoning as D.