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The insurance behemoth has announced that it will hire 1,200 new employees
and open three new facilities in
Europe, which is part of an effort to solidify their position as the largest company in its field.
(A) Europe, which is part of an effort to solidify their
(B) Europe, a part of an effort to try to solidify its
(C) Europe, a part of an effort solidifying its
(D) Europe as a part of an effort to solidify their
(E) Europe as part of an effort to solidify its
Source: GMAT Hacks - 072513
first the split is clearly between ITS and THEIR.
THE INSURANCE BEHEMOTH is singular hence ITS is the correct pronoun usage here.
moreover a part of an effort==>this has an extra article A....Which is not required because part and a part conveys the same meaning here.
lets come to the option.
(A) Europe,
which is part of an effort to solidify
theirWRONG-usage of WHICH is wrong.
-usage of THEIR is wrong.
(B) Europe,
a part of an effort
to try to solidify its
WRONG- article A is unnecessary.
-try and effort ==>is redundant.
(C) Europe,
a part of an effort
solidifying its
WRONG-article A is unnecessary.
-effort solidifying its....=>ING form changes the meaning...as meaning conveyed here is effort is solidifying rather the purpose of an effort is to solidify.
(D) Europe as a part of an effort to solidify their
WRONG- article A is unnecessary.
-usage of THEIR is wrong.
(E) Europe as part of an effort to solidify its
CORRECT.hope it helps.