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# help with comma

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01 Nov 2003, 22:50
Wisconsin, Illinois, Florida, and Minnesota have begun to enforce statewide bans prohibiting landfills from accepting leaves.

Wisconsin, Illinois, Florida, and Minnesota have begun to enforce statewide bans, prohibiting landfills from accepting leaves.

what is difference between the 2 sentence?
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02 Nov 2003, 07:28
seems that the first one is better, since the comma in the last one is an indication that 'prohibiting' modifies W,Il, Fl instead of bans.

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02 Nov 2003, 20:27
The second one is better, in that the phrase 'prohibiting landfills ...' acts as a qualifier for 'bans'.

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02 Nov 2003, 22:39
hnguyen wrote:
Wisconsin, Illinois, Florida, and Minnesota have begun to enforce statewide bans prohibiting landfills from accepting leaves.

Wisconsin, Illinois, Florida, and Minnesota have begun to enforce statewide bans, prohibiting landfills from accepting leaves.

what is difference between the 2 sentence?
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IMO, in the first, prohibit "go directly" to BAN
while in the second, prohibit "go to" the fact that some states enforce the ban (not the ban itself)
sorry I don't have good at expressing gramatical issue.
Any other idea?
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03 Nov 2003, 05:51
Wisconsin, Illinois, Florida, and Minnesota have begun to enforce statewide bans prohibiting landfills from accepting leaves.

in this case PROHIBITING modifies BANS

Wisconsin, Illinois, Florida, and Minnesota have begun to enforce statewide bans, prohibiting landfills from accepting leaves.

in this case PROHIBITING modifies Wisconsin, Illinois, Florida, and Minnesota

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