West winds are formed from the evaporation of the seas’ water that is heated by the Sun and rises high into the aerosphere, creating large zones of surface currents.
Meaning: The water of the sea evaporates and rises into the aerosphere to form WW. Sun heats the seawater. This evaporated water crates large zones of surface current.
A. West winds are formed from the evaporation of the seas’ water that is heated by the Sun and rises high into the aerosphere, creating large zones of surface currents
Incorrect: 1. Passive construction (But not crime)
2.possessive noun
3. modifier - creating large zones of surface current - seems to modify WW. This is incorrect
B. West winds form by the Sun’s heat evaporating the water in the seas, which rises high into the aerosphere, creating large zones of surface currents
Incorrect:
It seems like WW forms by heat, not by evaporated water
C. Heated by the Sun, sea water evaporates, rises high into the aerosphere, and creates large zones of surface currents to form West winds
Correct: evaporates, rises and creates maintain parallelism.
D. The water in the seas evaporated, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the aerosphere, and creates large zones of surface currents, which forms West winds
Incorrect:
Modifier - warmed by the sun- modifying water or sea?
which forms - incorrect modifier
E. Sea water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the aerosphere, which then creates large zones of surface currents to create as West winds
Incorrect:
which incorrectly modifies aerosphere.
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