Last visit was: 24 Apr 2024, 04:05 It is currently 24 Apr 2024, 04:05

Close
GMAT Club Daily Prep
Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions. We have subscribed you to Daily Prep Questions via email.

Customized
for You

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Track
Your Progress

every week, we’ll send you an estimated GMAT score based on your performance

Practice
Pays

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History
Not interested in getting valuable practice questions and articles delivered to your email? No problem, unsubscribe here.
Close
Request Expert Reply
Confirm Cancel
User avatar
Intern
Intern
Joined: 27 Aug 2009
Posts: 19
Own Kudos [?]: 9 [0]
Given Kudos: 1
Send PM
User avatar
Intern
Intern
Joined: 27 Aug 2009
Posts: 19
Own Kudos [?]: 9 [0]
Given Kudos: 1
Send PM
User avatar
Intern
Intern
Joined: 30 Aug 2009
Posts: 37
Own Kudos [?]: 13 [0]
Given Kudos: 7
Location: LA
Send PM
User avatar
Intern
Intern
Joined: 22 Jun 2007
Posts: 22
Own Kudos [?]: 17 [0]
Given Kudos: 1
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
IMO A

in B contained is not the wright as it takes it to the past tense.
in D the "pattern of Consumption containing " doesn't seems to be right.

Please provide the OA.
User avatar
Manager
Manager
Joined: 05 Jun 2009
Posts: 248
Own Kudos [?]: 1140 [3]
Given Kudos: 106
GMAT 2: 720  Q50  V36
WE 1: 7years (Financial Services - Consultant, BA)
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
3
Kudos
IMO D
Quote:
in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of consumption that will contain too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain that elevate the minimum level ingestion the brain needs for satiation

a) that will contain too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain
- 'will contain' is incorrect here; we need present tense not future tense
b) that contained too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain
- 'contained' should be in present tense.
- 'this' is required before the 'food', for it to refer to the unhealthy food.

c) that has a content of too much of unhealthy food, this intake will initiate changes in the brain
- 'this intake' has no antecedent
- intake of 'this food' is correct usage as 'this food' refers back to the unhealthy food.

d) containing too much unhealthy food, their intake of this food will initiate changes in the brain
- correct.
e) containing too much unhealthy food, so that their intake of this food cause changes to occur in the brain
- if X <present>, Y will ('will' is required) == if..then clause
- (that elevate..) is misplaced modifier, as it needs to modify the changes in brain and not the brain.
User avatar
Manager
Manager
Joined: 28 Aug 2009
Posts: 75
Own Kudos [?]: 191 [1]
Given Kudos: 1
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
1
Kudos
in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of consumption that will contain too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain that elevate the minimum level ingestion the brain needs for satiation
a)that will contain too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain
FUTURE TENSE "WILL CONTAIN" IS INCORRECT SINCE VERB IS PRESENT TENSE "CONTINUE"..OUT
b) that contained too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain
PAST TENSE "CONTAINED" IS INCORRECT SINCE VERB IS PRESENT TENSE "CONTINUE"..OUT
c) that has a content of too much of unhealthy food, this intake will initiate changes in the brain
"HAS A CONTENT" IS WORDY
"THIS" HAS NO REFERRANT ..OUT
d) containing too much unhealthy food, their intake of this food will initiate changes in the brain
CORRECT
e) containing too much unhealthy food, so that their intake of this food cause changes to occur in the brain
"IF..SO THAT " IS INCORRECT SENTENCE STRUCTURE....IF THEN(EXPLICIT OR SILENT) SHOULD BE USED..OUT
Senior Manager
Senior Manager
Joined: 02 Oct 2009
Posts: 310
Own Kudos [?]: 3792 [0]
Given Kudos: 412
GMAT 1: 530 Q47 V17
GMAT 2: 710 Q50 V36
WE:Business Development (Consulting)
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
Its D

explanation given is good thanku people
User avatar
Manager
Manager
Joined: 20 Dec 2009
Status:Can't give up
Posts: 142
Own Kudos [?]: 66 [0]
Given Kudos: 34
GPA: 3.5
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
IMO = D because the sentence must be in present tense.

Sudeep - nice response. kudos budy.
User avatar
Manager
Manager
Joined: 13 Dec 2009
Posts: 112
Own Kudos [?]: 927 [0]
Given Kudos: 13
Concentration: Consulting
 Q49  V40
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
Yup, i think its D.
E is close but the 'so that' is not required.

Originally posted by sidhu4u on 04 Mar 2010, 03:48.
Last edited by sidhu4u on 04 Mar 2010, 11:27, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
Intern
Intern
Joined: 29 Dec 2009
Posts: 33
Own Kudos [?]: 127 [0]
Given Kudos: 10
Location: india
 Q44  V37 GMAT 2: 680  Q49  V34
GPA: 2.5
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
this food is awkward bu d is only choice left
avatar
Manager
Manager
Joined: 26 May 2009
Posts: 161
Own Kudos [?]: 612 [0]
Given Kudos: 13
 Q49  V32 GMAT 2: 700  Q49  V35
Send PM
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of consumption that will contain too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain that elevate the minimum level ingestion the brain needs for satiation

b) that contained too much unhealthy food, their food intake will initiate changes in the brain
c) that has a content of too much of unhealthy food, this intake will initiate changes in the brain
d) containing too much unhealthy food, their intake of this food will initiate changes in the brain
e) containing too much unhealthy food, so that their intake of this food cause changes to occur in the brain

It is not their in take of food that will initiate the brain changes, it is their consumption of the unhealthy food which will cause this. And this is the main difference that eliminates A, B.

so this food in D clearly refers to unhealthy food so it should win.

Take Way :

References to the proper antecedent to convey the correct meaning is as important as grammatical construction of the sentence.



Archived Topic
Hi there,
This topic has been closed and archived due to inactivity or violation of community quality standards. No more replies are possible here.
Where to now? Join ongoing discussions on thousands of quality questions in our Sentence Correction (EA only) Forum
Still interested in this question? Check out the "Best Topics" block above for a better discussion on this exact question, as well as several more related questions.
Thank you for understanding, and happy exploring!
GMAT Club Bot
Re: in time and in some cases, if people continue a pattern of [#permalink]
Moderators:
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
6917 posts
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
238 posts
Current Student
278 posts

Powered by phpBB © phpBB Group | Emoji artwork provided by EmojiOne