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Re: Invented for use in short wavelength radar during WWII, the cavity mag [#permalink]
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MoulikaSaxena wrote:
Is A preferred over C because C is wordier?
The placement of called the cavity magnetron is not very good in option C.

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Invented for use in short wavelength radar during WWII, the cavity magnetron, which was able to produce electromagnetic waves at a lower frequency than had previously been possible, was the basis for the development of the common microwave oven.


A. Invented for use in short wavelength radar during WWII, the cavity magnetron, which was able to produce electromagnetic waves at a lower frequency than had previously been possible,

B. Invented for use in short wavelength radar during WWII, having the ability to produce electromagnetic waves at a lower frequency than had previously been possible, the cavity magnetron

C. A technology invented for use in short wavelength radar during WWII, called the cavity magnetron, which was able to produce electromagnetic waves at a lower frequency than had previously been possible,

D. A technology invented for use in short wavelength radar during WWII, called the cavity magnetron, which had the ability to produce electromagnetic waves at a lower frequency than had previously been possible,

E. A technology invented for use in short wavelength radar during WWII and had the ability to produce electromagnetic waves at a lower frequency than had previously been possible, called the cavity magnetron,


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Creating a filter: as we make our way through the original sentence, we may not spot any candidate for error. The phrase started with "invented" properly modifies "magnetron," for example. We'll look for objective errors and come back to (A).

Finding objective errors: in (B), putting the two long modifiers in a row is inferior style, and "having the ability" is inferior to "able," so (B) is out. Choices (C), (D) and (E) are all similar. In all three, "called the cavity magnetron" is improperly constructed as a modifier set off by commas. Properly it's an elided restrictive clause standing for "that was called the cavity magnetron" and belongs closer to "technology" and not set off by commas. Conceptually, it defines the word "technology" and should be close to it. Choices (C) through (E) also distort the intended meaning of the sentence, because the cavity magnetron is what the sentence is about and the focus has shifted away from it.

The correct answer is (A).
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