OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
For SC butler Questions Click Here THE PROMPTQuote:
Like compact discs, which have increased in storage capacity over the years, the technology used for digital video discs has allowed more and more data to be squeezed onto smaller spaces. THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) Like
compact discs, which have increased in storage capacity over the years,
the technology used for digital video discs has allowed more and more data to be squeezed onto smaller spaces.
• Wrong comparison.
→ Compact discs are compared to technology.
Compact discs should be compared to digital video discs.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B)
As with compact discs, which have increased their storage capacity over the years, digital video
discs has allowed more and more data to be squeezed into smaller spaces.
• subject/verb disagreement
The plural
digital video discs cannot be paired with the singular verb
has.
• diction error
→ "As with" is not standard diction.
→ This phrase should state:
as is the case withBig takeaway here:
as is the case can stand for an extraordinary range of things, including verb phrases and even clauses.
As is the case almost always refers to circumstances or situations.
The phrasing has powers similar to those of
do so.(But
as with? No.)
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) As it has
[done] with compact discs, increasing their storage capacity over the years,
the technology used for digital video discs
have allowed more and more data to be squeezed into smaller spaces.
• subject/verb disagreement
→ The singular
technology cannot be paired with the plural
have.• Nonsensical:
As it has with compact discs→ As it (technology) has
what? Has
done what?
→
has is a helping verb. The main verb attached to
have (a past participle, a verbED) is missing.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) Like compact discs, which have increased in storage capacity over the years, digital video discs have more and more data squeezed into smaller spaces.
• I do not see any errors
• compact discs are correctly compared to similar things, i.e., digital video discs
• "Like compact discs" is correct.
If you see the preposition
like, make sure it is followed by a noun.
More specifically, make sure that
like is NOT followed by a verb.
You cannot put a verb after a preposition.
Now, if you see
as in a comparison, make sure that
as IS followed by a verb.
• meaning is sound. The CDs and DVDs have increased in storage capacity.
KEEP
Quote:
E) Like
that of compact discs, which has
increased in storage capacity over the years,
the technology used for digital video discs has allowed more and more data to be squeezed onto a smaller space.
• Meaning error: the
technology has not itself "increased in storage capacity"!
The CDs and DVDs have increased in storage capacity—not the technology itself.
ELIMINATE E
The correct answer is D.COMMENTSI am glad to see some people whom I have not seen in a little while.
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