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I am still not sure about the difference between "what constitutes" and "in constituting"
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I am still not sure about the difference between "what constitutes" and "in constituting"

B says:

Grammatically, B and E are both correct. However, E is illogical. Why so?

B:
Critics fear that the decline in "what constitutes a good secondary school education" has weakened this country's standing in the world.
Shorten it like this:
Critics fear that the decline in "SOMETHING" has weakened this country's standing in the world.

SOMETHING in B refers to the constituent of a good secondary school education. e.g. Let us consider that constituent as "qualified teachers".
So, B now means, decline "in qualified teachers" has weakened this country's blah-blah.

E changes the focus from CONSTITUENT to the "process of constituting"

Critics fear that the decline in "constituting a good secondary school education" has weakened this country's standing in the world.

Constituting a good secondary school education IS not the constituent but a process AND the decline is in the constituent itself and not in the process of constituting.

A correct sentence should always convey the intended meaning and E is not what author wants to convey.



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