rafa90
Hi,
I came across a question in the Manhattan SC guide involving usage of noun modifier 'which'.
As per the theory in the modifiers chapter, which is always a noun modifier - no concerns here!
comma+ which is a non-essential noun modifier - okay I get this as well.
Consider this example,
INCORRECT: People who are well informed know what Bordeaux is a French region whose most famous export is the wine
which bears its nameCORRECT: People who are well informed know what Bordeaux is a French region whose most famous export is the wine
that bears its nameAm I right that the presence or the absence of a 'comma' does not matter when using noun modifiers such as 'while,who etc' as these modifiers tend to create a non-essential meaning to the sentence?
I would be happy to help out,
rafa90. The restrictive
which clause is considered more British than American, but in any case, GMAC™ makes it clear in the OG Sentence Correction chapter that
that versus
which in such a context will
not be tested as a split. Yes, GMAC™ tends to use the restrictive
that in SC questions, but I have seen the restrictive
which pop up in other Verbal contexts (RC passages, for one).
The question you pose at the end of your post gives me some cause for concern. To be clear,
the presence or absence of a pair of commas can make a difference in the expressed meaning of a sentence, and you would have to rely on contextual clues to tell which version was the correct one. That is, such a consideration might not be the sole means of separating two SC answer choices, but you should be approaching SC questions holistically anyway. Consider the following sentences:
Sentence 1: Runners who overtrain are more prone to injury.
In the sentence above, the
who clause is restrictive and conveys that only a subset of runners, specifically those who train too much, are more prone to injury.
Sentence 2: Runners, who overtrain, are more prone to injury.
Although this sentence uses the same words, the commas change the meaning entirely, suggesting that
all runners overtrain and are therefore more prone to injury than are non-runners.
Be careful when looking to create absolute rules of grammar. They rarely hold up under scrutiny, and they can cause you to blindly adhere to an incorrect line of thought. I hope that helps. Thank you for thinking to tag me.
- Andrew