Bunuel wrote:
Over the past decade, researchers studying the brains of sparrows have discovered that each sex uses what is called
their sound control system to convert sound waves to social messages and then using them to find mates, similar to how humans use vocal sounds to communicate.
A. their sound control system to convert sound waves to social messages and then using them to find
B. their sound control system to convert sound waves to social messages and then use it for finding
C. their sound control system for converting sound waves to social messages and then using them for finding
D. its sound control system to convert sound waves to social messages and then uses them to find
E. its sound control system for converting sound waves to social messages and then using it for finding
VERITAS PREP OFFICIAL SOLUTION:
This problem is filled with pronoun choices, so focus your attention there. At the start of each answer, you have a choice between “their” and “its.” Carefully go back to find the proper antecedent – in this case it is “each sex” so it should be: “each sex uses…its sound control system”. From this error you can eliminate (A), (B), and (C).
In choosing between (D) and (E), there are several diction choices (“to convert” vs” for converting” and “to find” vs. “for finding”) but you should look for a more concrete decision point, such as “it” vs. “them” or “uses” vs. “using”. The pronoun choice of “it” vs. “them” is confusing until you carefully consider the meaning in the sentence: “each sex uses its sound control system to convert sound waves to social messages and then uses the social messages (them) to find mates…” If you missed this and thought that “it” referred back to “sound control system” you can also see that “using” is incorrect. In (E), with the use of the gerund “using” instead of the active verb “uses”, this structure must go back with other gerund “converting” but this meaning is illogical: “each sex uses its sound control system for converting…and then using IT (the sound control system?)”. The sound control system cannot use itself for doing something!
Only (D) uses the proper pronouns and creates a logical meaning with the use of a separate active verb “uses.”