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Context: I am a third-year bachelor of Economics and Business Economics student in the Netherlands, with a specialization in Finance. I have a strong grade (if converted to a UK grade, it is A+), an honours distinction, two leadership positions in two different association, limited work experience as a Financial Analyst in a real-estate company this summer, a volunteering experience in a refugee camp in Moldova (this was in the first month of the Russian invasion in Ukraine) and a GMAT Focus score of 625 (with a low score on quant of 78). I know that the GMAT is not stellar, but I cannot retake it now, and I do not want to lose first round advantage. I am open to feedback and I would appreciate any responses. Thanks in advance.
Why does someone choose to study finance? Most will tell you one word as their motivation: money. Obviously, a career in finance can lead to a lucrative salary, but I always found motivation in the complexity of finance itself. My interest in finance was apparent from a young age. This interest has followed me up into adulthood and was a decisive factor when I chose to study economics with a specialization in finance.
In this context, I would like to say that I did not only choose to apply to this program because of its prestige but also for its detailed curriculum, rewarding students for their curiosity and effort. I expect that this master program will be a challenge, for which I am more than ready. With my current studies in economics with a specialization in finance and a minor course in applied econometrics, I bring to the table a solid foundation, upon which I want to build with Bocconi, and an array of strong quantitative skills that make me ready for the rigorous quantitative part of finance.
What would be my end goal, you might ask? I am fascinated with the world of asset management, and I believe that Bocconi’s master’s program in finance, with the option of pursuing a specialization in quantitative finance and asset management, will give me the necessary tools to excel in my career and a detailed understanding of the pillars for success in the field of asset management.
While my GMAT Quantitative Reasoning score may not fully reflect my abilities, my 8.9 GPA in a quantitative program such as economics does. Choosing applied econometrics as my minor further demonstrates my commitment to mastering complex material and challenging myself. I am committed to continuously improving and eager to push myself to new heights at Bocconi. With my passion for finance, quantitative expertise, and drive for excellence, I am excited about the opportunity to contribute to and learn from Bocconi’s Master in Finance program, as well as bringing myself a step closer to becoming a portfolio manager.
Why does someone choose to study finance? Most will tell you one word as their motivation: money. Obviously, a career in finance can lead to a lucrative salary, but I always found motivation in the complexity of finance itself. My interest in finance was apparent from a young age. This interest has followed me up into adulthood and was a decisive factor when I chose to study economics with a specialization in finance.
In this context, I would like to say that I did not only choose to apply to this program because of its prestige but also for its detailed curriculum, rewarding students for their curiosity and effort. I expect that this master program will be a challenge, for which I am more than ready. With my current studies in economics with a specialization in finance and a minor course in applied econometrics, I bring to the table a solid foundation, upon which I want to build with Bocconi, and an array of strong quantitative skills that make me ready for the rigorous quantitative part of finance.
What would be my end goal, you might ask? I am fascinated with the world of asset management, and I believe that Bocconi’s master’s program in finance, with the option of pursuing a specialization in quantitative finance and asset management, will give me the necessary tools to excel in my career and a detailed understanding of the pillars for success in the field of asset management.
While my GMAT Quantitative Reasoning score may not fully reflect my abilities, my 8.9 GPA in a quantitative program such as economics does. Choosing applied econometrics as my minor further demonstrates my commitment to mastering complex material and challenging myself. I am committed to continuously improving and eager to push myself to new heights at Bocconi. With my passion for finance, quantitative expertise, and drive for excellence, I am excited about the opportunity to contribute to and learn from Bocconi’s Master in Finance program, as well as bringing myself a step closer to becoming a portfolio manager.
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Hey Bud,
Could you please give a bit more context on what's the length of the Motivation letter?
From the looks of it currently its very generic and does not answer the questions why you are unique. Whenever writing an SOP or Motivational letter think if what you are writing can be written by someone else or not. the current start is fine but again very generic.
I review 20 SOPs everyday and most of them start with the " Childhood story". Even if you would want to use childhood I think you need to make it more Personalized but talking about what specific thing created an Interest.
your Internships and the Impact there is going to be very Important in this Motivational letter which is missing.
Even if you want to apply in R1s I would suggest the Motivational letter is something is extremely unique and answers the question indirectly as to why you are a better candidate than someone with a 675 or 695 score.
All the best!
Kevin
Founder, Al-Connect
Could you please give a bit more context on what's the length of the Motivation letter?
From the looks of it currently its very generic and does not answer the questions why you are unique. Whenever writing an SOP or Motivational letter think if what you are writing can be written by someone else or not. the current start is fine but again very generic.
I review 20 SOPs everyday and most of them start with the " Childhood story". Even if you would want to use childhood I think you need to make it more Personalized but talking about what specific thing created an Interest.
your Internships and the Impact there is going to be very Important in this Motivational letter which is missing.
Even if you want to apply in R1s I would suggest the Motivational letter is something is extremely unique and answers the question indirectly as to why you are a better candidate than someone with a 675 or 695 score.
All the best!
Kevin
Founder, Al-Connect
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Great write up.. try connecting with an existing student to understand more about school...
