STEP 1 - UNDERSTANDING INTENDED MEANINGProfessional tennis players, similar to professionals in other sports, exhibit different strengths such as
serving with speed and accuracy,
performing with endurance and run swiftly even late in a match,
and
defending against tricky drop shots and lobs."The above construction contains a nested list (mini list) within a bigger list (as indicated by the use of the last “and”).
1. serving with speed and accuracy,
2. performing with endurance and run swiftly even late in a match,
and
3. defending against tricky drop shots and lobs."
The nested list is the following:
1. serving with speed and accuracy, - a
phrase starting with verb-ing
2. performing with endurance – a
phrase starting with verb-ing
and
3. run swiftly even late in a match – a
clause starting with a verb
The nested list is not parallel grammatically. It contains two phrases and a clause.
Correct version:
1. serving with speed and accuracy, - a phrase starting with verb-ing
2. performing with endurance – a phrase starting with verb-ing
and
3. running swiftly even late in a match – a phrase starting with verb-ing
INTENDED MEANING• Professional tennis players, similar to professionals in other sports, exhibit different strengths.
• These strengths are:
• They serve with speed and accuracy, perform with endurance and run swiftly even late in a match.
• They also defend against tricky drop shots and lobs
STEP - 2 ANSWER CHOICE ELIMINATIONChoice E can be eliminated as it has an error similar to that in choice A
Choice B analysis
Professional tennis players, similar to professionals in other sports, exhibit different strengths such as
serving with speed and accuracy,
performing with endurance and running swiftly even late in a match, and defending against tricky drop shots and lobs."
1. Logical
2. Clear
3. Same as the intended meaning
Correct Choice.Choice C analysis
Professional tennis players, similar to professionals in other sports, exhibit different strengths such as serving with speed and accuracy,
performing with endurance running swiftly even late in a match, and defending against tricky drop shots and lobs."
The above choice conveys a very illogical meaning –
Either “endurance” is “running swiftly”
Or “performing” with something called “endurance running” swiftly. Neither is per the intended meaning.
Incorrect Choice.
Choice D analysis
Professional tennis players, similar to professionals in other sports, exhibit different strengths such as
serving with speed and accuracy,
to perform with endurance and to run swiftly even late in a match, and defending against tricky drop shots and lobs."
The nested list now has one “verb-ing” phrase and two “to-verbal” phrases. The list is still grammatically not parallel.
Incorrect Choice.