archbarc
Resembling both a lion and a man, ancient Egyptians constructed the Sphinx nearly 4,000 years ago.
A. Resembling both a lion and
B. Building it to resemble both a lion and
C. Resembling it to both a lion and
D. Having a resemblance to both a lion and
E. Building it to resemble not only a lion and also
Official Solution (Credit: Manhattan Prep)
In the original sentence, the introductory adjective phrase “resembling both a lion and a man” incorrectly describes “ancient Egyptians.” When in doubt, an introductory modifier describes the first available noun after it. The underlined portion of the sentence must be altered to ensure that “the Sphinx” rather than “ancient Egyptians” is properly modified.
(A) This choice is incorrect as it repeats the original sentence.
(B) CORRECT. By including the singular pronoun “it,” the introductory phrase refers to the singular “the Sphinx” rather than the plural “ancient Egyptians.”
(C) In this choice, “resembling it to” is awkward and ungrammatical.
(D) In this choice, the introductory phrase incorrectly describes “ancient Egyptians” rather than “the Sphinx.” When in doubt, an introductory modifier describes the first available noun after it.
(E) Although this choice corrects the modifier error by including the singular pronoun “it,” it uses the unidiomatic “not only a lion and also a man.” The proper idiom is “not only X but also Y.”