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Restorers say that if allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa, the colors Leonardo da Vinci painted nearly five hundred years ago will once again shine through.
(A) if
(B) if it is
(C) if they are
(D) when
(E) when it is
GMATPrep Code : VSC002587
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended core meaning this sentence is that if restorers are allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa, the colors Leonardo da Vinci painted nearly five hundred years ago will once again shine through.
Concepts tested here: Subject-Verb Agreement + Meaning + Modifiers + Pronouns + Idioms• In a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun; this is one of the most frequently tested concepts on GMAT sentence correction.
• "it" cannot be used to refer to human beings.
• "if" is used to introduce conditional statements.
• "when" is used to refer to a point in time.
A: Trap.
1/ The sentence formed by this answer choice incorrectly uses "if allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa" to modify "the colors Leonardo da Vinci painted", illogically implying that
the colors may be allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa; the intended meaning is that
the restorers may be allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
B: Trap.
1/ This answer choice incorrectly refers to the plural noun "Restorers" with the singular pronoun "it" and the singular verb "is".
2/ Option B incorrectly uses the pronoun "it" to refer to the noun "Restorers"; remember, "it" cannot be used to refer to human beings.
C: Correct.1/ This answer choice correctly refers to the plural noun "Restorers" with the plural pronoun "they" and the plural verb "are".
2/ Option C correctly uses the pronoun "they" to refer to the noun "Restorers".
3/ The sentence formed by Option C uses the phrase "if they are allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa"; the construction of this phrase avoids the modifier error seen in Options A and D, as it utilizes a conditional clause rather than the "phrase + comma + noun" construction, conveying the intended meaning - that
the restorers may be allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa.
4/ Option C correctly uses "if" to introduce a conditional statement.
D:1/ The sentence formed by this answer choice incorrectly uses "when allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa" to modify "the colors Leonardo da Vinci painted", illogically implying that
the colors may be allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa; the intended meaning is that
the restorers may be allowed to remove and replace the discolored layer of varnish on the Mona Lisa; remember, in a “phrase + comma + noun” construction, the phrase must correctly modify the noun.
2/ Option D incorrectly uses "when" to present a conditional statement; remember, "if" is used to introduce conditional statements, and "when" is used to refer to a point in time.
E:1/ This answer choice incorrectly refers to the plural noun "Restorers" with the singular pronoun "it" and the singular verb "is".
2/ Option E incorrectly uses the pronoun "it" to refer to the noun "Restorers"; remember, "it" cannot be used to refer to human beings.
3/ Option E incorrectly uses "when" to present a conditional statement; remember, "if" is used to introduce conditional statements, and "when" is used to refer to a point in time.
Hence, C is the best answer choice.To understand the concept of "Phrase Comma Subject" and "Subject Comma Phrase" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):
All the best!
Experts' Global Team