Official Solution:A recent study found that if children socialize and were reading challenging material, they will be more likely to read on their own and gain proficiency quicker than will children who read material that is overly simplistic.A. were reading challenging material, they will be more likely to read on their own and gain proficiency quicker than will
B. read challenging material, they are more likely to read on their own and gain proficiency quicker than will
C. read challenging material, they are more likely to read on their own and gain proficiency more quickly than
D. were reading challenging material, they have been more likely to read on their own and gain proficiency quicker than will
E. were reading challenging material, they are more likely to read on their own and gain proficiency more quickly than
This sentence contains several errors.
(1) First, the phrase
socialize and were reading uses two mismatched verb tenses. Because
socialize, in the present tense, is not underlined, this must be the correct tense; therefore, we need the present tense of
were reading, namely
read. (2) In addition, the phrase
gain proficiency quicker than will is also idiomatically incorrect and awkward. It should read
gain proficiency more quickly than. Finally, the word
will in the phrase
than will children is wordy and unnecessary.
Choice B correctly changes all the verbs into the present tense, but retains the unnecessary word
will.
Choice C fixes all of the errors: the verbs are all in the present tense, the idiom is corrected, and the word
will is correctly omitted.
Answer choices D and E do not make all the tenses consistent and retain the incorrect past participle
were reading.
Choice
C is the correct answer.
Answer: C