taniyaray wrote:
The patient's rare disease was treated using novel techniques developed at the medical school.
Can someone please explain what is wrong in the sentence and why ?
Will it be the corrected form ?
- The patient's rare disease was treated, using novel techniques developed at the medical school.
Source : Manhatten SC Book
Hi
We need to have the subject that is using novel techniques. In the above sentences, the subject is missing.
It can be corrected by introducing a subject, for e.g.
The doctor treated the patient's rare disease using novel techniques developed at the medical school.
Hope it is clear.
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